All Comments on 'Overlook'

Is it because this section has more traffic that people use it to put their nonromantic stories?

Not romantic... this should be in the "rape" section

rather spoiled by every sentence having a separate paragraph.

Good erotic writing. Literotica is wronger than SOL (storiesonline.net) with its hub categories.........

Loved the sexy description of the way they looked at each other. Also thanks for reminding me how much fun sex in a car can be! Great story.

BTW dominance / submissive sexual role playing is a real turn on to many women and men (Heard of "50 Shades of Grey?" No one has read that book.). I don't recall any of the characters in the story saying "NO STOP" or expressing any displeasure. If this kind of erotic experience isn't your thing then move on to another story please!

From the start it was humorous, i enjoyed it keep up the good work.

Tota fucking rubbish Written by a total wanker