All Comments on 'Overwhelmed'

The woman he thought he was fucking was really fucking Stan in her mind, now she's fucking him for real. Time to take his 5 and a half inches and go looking for woman with some brains, and integrity.

The only remaining question, will he let Stan get away with it?

If this is a cuck/whore fantasy I give it a 3. If not, a 2.

now its time for mind trips to be put to rest, TK U MLJ LV NV

divorce

The author made a good attempt at farce. Not easy to do.

That was a good touch. The only good touch though

Most guys are looking for more than a 36C? She will have sex and blow him any time, but he's bored? Paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences? Just wondering what the hell? Very dismal effort. To much size crap to get through the first page.

yawn yawn yawn

Once again the anons are outdoing themselves with the comments. I wonder why they spend so much time reading this kind of story if they don't like them. Truth is they're fascinated by the concept but are too afraid to try it themselves.

@author: lots of mistakes in this story. Sentences that don't make any sense, mispellings etc. 3*

You could feel the tension growing along with his total helplessness to alter the course of events. I'd love to hear part 2...will she be a regular stop in his trips?

Just one nit: in California you'd be 2 hours *behind* the Midwest, so by the time he was reading her texts at 3am his time, it would have been 5am her time and she'd probably already been split, seeded multiple times and full of his little swimmers on a mission! Btw, I live on the west coast and have often been defeated by time-zone math! I think you had the math correct on the texts exchanged as she was getting ready to go out.

Sorry to go on, but I did like the story and hope you'll continue it....

Yep, I think it is time to divorce her before going any farther. You need to be able to trust her-now you can't at all. Sorry but the pics she sent you should be forwarded to her pastor, family, and friends to show them all just what a coniving cunt she is. Also to your buddy Richard. And then make sure he gets fired as well. Since he knew of this whole thing. Fuck friends like him.

No comments...just 1*

Married, getting old, no kids, selfish, crazy cheating wife, why bother? who needs this shit? : Dump her quickly and move on.

Leave a voice message to wife , PACK YOUR SHIT AND DONT BE THERE WHEN I GET BACK.

Get back into town and clean out all the money. Leave nothing. Do not go home. Let Her realize by herself how she screwed up. Don't file for divorce. Just leave.

Trying to Call her after the Fact. I would go back to the Hotel Pack and Catch the Next Flight Home. Get everything together. Then when she call's tell her to tell Stan to Take Care because when I see him he could be Missing a Few Inches.

Well is seems a sequel is needed to find what happened in the ladies loo and our hero to make the biggest decision of his life, is his wife toast !

Love the text build up.

I enjoyed this immensely. Keep writing. It's always good to see a text exchange between a naughty hotwife and her hubby.

Don't leave it hanging. But be sure she doesn't even get half in the divorce settlement. Charge her with adultery since hubby has all the evidence.

Several word mistakes. Don't just rely on spell checking.

5 *'s this time.

Reading this shows NO LOVING WIFE, just a Cheater & He's a Cuck

That way she would know you didn't get any of the texts and are NOT AT ALL OKAY WITH HER CHEATING. Now get your head out of your ass and write the breakup story that should follow this one.

another small-dicked cock-loving redneck cuck.

The author did a very very poor job on this story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

I AM OUT of town for 3 weeks. Wife out partying down. you can guess what was going on 5

tells us the story is bad, it means it's GREAT!

Fucking idiot.

Oh yeah shes still your wife , fucking idiot and your not getting fucked no more

No, Yes, No

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka NEEDYOU200 aka 5+ANNONY!

another small-dicked cock-loving redneck cuck.

What marriage, this one's going down the toilet, besides she's more than likely knocked up by stan by time hubby gets home. More stupid little dicked closet homo turning own wifey into unloving cum dump slut.

regardless what those say who think this is real not just a story, finish of as long as it takes even if it turns into a btb story, don't care just finish it please

these guys are done. burn the bitch and move of.

Come on you write cuck/fag shit every story.

Your character is a real ass...and you're one for writing this crap!

She certainly didn't seem like she was sorry. At least he has pictures to show everyone during the divorce.

Do not know what to make of this story!

Let her hold Stan's cock in her hand again. Just make sure.it is.no longer attached to Stan.

You need to finish this story.

Is there a confrontation? Is there revenge? What happens?

Not finished. A good story always has a beginning, a plot and an end.

Incidentally, a couple of words for the author. COLLEGE HEELS

so how is she a "loving" wife?!?

This socalled author is pure horseshit.

Hell No! She's a fucking whore

no don;t be a wimp ,kick the whore to the curb. tell she can have big dick stan , and move on .

The problem is slut. The solution is divorce.

I agree with most everyone, this story sucked. She saw, She wanted, She got it, Stan's cock, that is. She had NO REASON to have sex with Stan because she knew it was wrong and She WAS married. She was a closet slut, but now, it's in the open. He was stupid for believing she wouldn't do Stan and now has text pictures of her affair. So unless there is another chapter, he will probably divorce the bitch. The storyline itself was a standard cheating wife/poor husband with no real moral value..... I am not a fan of these kind of stories, so only one star.

Thank god people get off on a woman who rarely exists in real life.

Dumb cuck crap as usual.

Twat

did not finish the story dump her

Just another story with no ending.

As with other authors, story's unfinished. For a wife that doesn't celebrate Valentine's Day, she surely seemed to that year. Why would she even consider her actions with that guy? He's not too late, she's turned into a slut & gave him proof of her cheating & grounds for divorce. How many other times did it happen with that guy that she's not telling him about?

0 star - no ending this crap story

not good

It's a fiver to me, this thing has a cute approach to a sexual buildup.

What is it with these writers that crap out in the 4rg quarter 1/5 for no stamina

End the goddamn story

Underwhelmed