All Comments on 'Owned Ch. 01'

Brilliant! So hot, please write more.

hope she manages to turn the tables. she seems week. thought vampires were stronger. though witing is good.

It's a good start. You have good grammar and a catching beginning. I personally don't like a submissive female character and like a little mystery to go with the stories, A cliff hanger. Ready for more of your material!

It appears Emily will do anything for Nikolai since she is in love with him and became a part if his harem just so she could have some connection to him. I weakness for him is going to cause her great heartache.

Phew! I'm melting here. Somebody pour a bucket of cold water over me. ;) OMG, this is awesome, and I can't believe we're having to wait this long for chapter 2. You're torturing us for the fun of it. Well enough, and post the next chapter please, because I'm now getting withdrawal symptoms. :)

I love love LOVE this story. It gets me wet every time I read it, ik TMI, but still, so truthful. When will chapter 2 come about?! I need to know what happens next!!! This is torture, sexy torture but torture nonetheless. I hope you bring us chapter 2 soon. I want to know so badly what happens!!!