All Comments on 'Pam's Sexual Awakening Pt. 01'

by DanaGordon

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irishcream44irishcream44about 6 years ago
Confused

Pam's Empty Nest Ch. 01 and 02 ???

DanaGordonDanaGordonabout 6 years agoAuthor
Clarification

This is Chapters 1, 2, and 3. After receiving much critique about the chapter lengths, I thought it best to pull those down and combine them into one larger chunk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very good..

Love it so far, I'm interested in where Pam goes with her new freedom, so far the story is very well constructed

The_Office_FanThe_Office_Fanabout 6 years ago
Interesting changes

I hope you'll still have the parts with the flirtatious texting back and forth between the two... that was what was great about the old pt.1 and pt.2

On a side note in my humble opinion don't feel like you have to take every criticism to heart. If you like shorter stories that's cool, no need for filler if don't like it :)

gunhilltraingunhilltrainabout 6 years ago
Hi Dana

I'm glad you came back.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very erotic! There were so many interesting relationships in The Office.

NotThatMiley123NotThatMiley1239 days ago

I love it! Your attention for detail makes the story so much more interesting. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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