by DanaGordon
This is Chapters 1, 2, and 3. After receiving much critique about the chapter lengths, I thought it best to pull those down and combine them into one larger chunk.
Love it so far, I'm interested in where Pam goes with her new freedom, so far the story is very well constructed
I hope you'll still have the parts with the flirtatious texting back and forth between the two... that was what was great about the old pt.1 and pt.2
On a side note in my humble opinion don't feel like you have to take every criticism to heart. If you like shorter stories that's cool, no need for filler if don't like it :)
I love it! Your attention for detail makes the story so much more interesting. I can’t wait to see what happens next!