by JBfrankenstein
Short and sweet. Really looking forward to seeing this naughty boy get what he desperately needs...feminising. Mmmmm delicious. XXX
I hate stories where a mother thinks the only way to change her son is to turn him into a sissy.
See above. I have rarely heard of a mother wanting her son to be a cross-dresser or transexual. I'm a male cross-dresser, and my mother accepted it as a childish role-playing game. But she certainly did not want to see me with an erection, let alone masturbating.
Wow, You DO have a vivid imagination!!!!!! Does your story have anything to do with some life experience?????? My sister used to dress me up as a girl all the time and I LOVED it. The older I got the more I dressed and my mom was shown how I actually looked as a girl. She LOVED the way I looked and taught me everything a girl should know. There is nothing better in this world than being a girl.
Jaye Dee Miller
Wow was this ever stupid. And his Mother wanted to treat him like that? What a bitch. When does he wake up and decide he wants to fuck his Mother? When does Yoda show up and take him away? This was just awful.
I also hope there will be more to this story!
Like a note that the author has given up, realizes they can't write worth a shit and will not try again!
As a story its premise is good and there is a lot of potential. It just needs a little more character, more history of the son and mothers relationship, don't be afraid to put in more details as it does seem rushed in places.
But practice makes everyone a better writer, keep at it and read other stories too so you can pick up on things. If people send you nasty or hurtful reviews then ignore them they are not worth your time. Keep at it.
what read some awesome erotica! stay tuned!!
As others said need a part two with a full transformation, at least that is my idea. :) Maybe Mom did not know it was going to really transform him into a her, she just thought it was a good sissy punishment.
Loved the story. Wish I could find a gallon of that potion. Hope he transforms into a silky dressed cock starved sissy!!