All Comments on 'Panty Potion'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More!

I have to know how far he goes! Please!

RebeccaTGRebeccaTGover 8 years ago
Please continue...

Short and sweet. Really looking forward to seeing this naughty boy get what he desperately needs...feminising. Mmmmm delicious. XXX

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 8 years ago
Oh, one of these

I hate stories where a mother thinks the only way to change her son is to turn him into a sissy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love it

One of the best stories I've read! Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too weird

See above. I have rarely heard of a mother wanting her son to be a cross-dresser or transexual. I'm a male cross-dresser, and my mother accepted it as a childish role-playing game. But she certainly did not want to see me with an erection, let alone masturbating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
MOM AS THE TEACHER

Wow, You DO have a vivid imagination!!!!!! Does your story have anything to do with some life experience?????? My sister used to dress me up as a girl all the time and I LOVED it. The older I got the more I dressed and my mom was shown how I actually looked as a girl. She LOVED the way I looked and taught me everything a girl should know. There is nothing better in this world than being a girl.

Jaye Dee Miller

MichelleCD1951MichelleCD1951over 8 years ago
MORE

hope there's going to be more to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A magic potion?

Wow was this ever stupid. And his Mother wanted to treat him like that? What a bitch. When does he wake up and decide he wants to fuck his Mother? When does Yoda show up and take him away? This was just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
To Michellecd 1951

I also hope there will be more to this story!

Like a note that the author has given up, realizes they can't write worth a shit and will not try again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
please make a sequel

It could be really funny to see what happens next

Miles63Miles63over 8 years ago
Good attempt but needs a little more.

As a story its premise is good and there is a lot of potential. It just needs a little more character, more history of the son and mothers relationship, don't be afraid to put in more details as it does seem rushed in places.

But practice makes everyone a better writer, keep at it and read other stories too so you can pick up on things. If people send you nasty or hurtful reviews then ignore them they are not worth your time. Keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well Whats Can I Say!!

it sound like the ROCKY HORROR show to me!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I show you how to write erotica!

what read some awesome erotica! stay tuned!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Small comment

Need 2 write a part 2!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Thought I was going to cream my pants

As others said need a part two with a full transformation, at least that is my idea. :) Maybe Mom did not know it was going to really transform him into a her, she just thought it was a good sissy punishment.

krafttykrafttyover 7 years ago
panties

dont stop now more chapters please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More!

I need more of this

petey377petey377about 5 years ago
cool

great start to becoming a sissy hope there will be more

CDsRsoHOTCDsRsoHOTover 2 years ago

Loved the story. Wish I could find a gallon of that potion. Hope he transforms into a silky dressed cock starved sissy!!

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