All Comments on 'Parfum Ch. 03'

You have me hooked. This is one of the most outstanding pieces I've read in years. I can hardy weight for the next chapter. What I find refreshing is that I can't anticipate what happens next. So many stories have no mystery. You can guess the outcome. This is different as well as being well written. Bravo

so now we have a woman that can turn men off when she says come on and fuck me?

The story was going well, the characters are pretty three dimensional, but then you had to completely replicate her problem with her husband with the our main character. A horny teenager who's been lusting after his teacher on some level for months and months. A horny teenager who had no problem staying erect with Ms. Grumpy.

Nope.. can't buy it.

My suspension of disbelief snapped and I was totally out of the story.