All Comments on 'Parking Leads to Dogging'

was really good the way you treated the whole situation... was very visual for me thanks :)

And when the doors of the minivan opened, ILMAO. That was comical. the sex was hot. I hope there is more.

A realistic story well conveyed.

Just one comment of constructive criticism, dialogue usually makes a story seem more real--you didn't use much, if any. Still, I think this is well written; you had a story to tell, and you did it very well. 4 stars from me.

Nice quick story. The circumstances would be hard to repeat- hard to find campsites with hot and cold running studs, but there you go- where there's a will there'll be a way. Plus there's a phone number, but that's not very spontaneous

Story. wish I could be that guy

This is absolutely the best story I've read in a very long time.

5 Stars...

Such an adventure I have a fantasy when I think about the theme of a hot wife

Writing dialog is HARD. You did darn good without it. Although the gay part is not for me, the rest of it was really good. Thanks.

Good story...thanks for posting.

You may be a cuck, but you sure ain’t no kind of author.

Delicious... great writing!

great story. any part 2 yet???

Very exciting, hot story. Wish something similar would come my way.

I really enjoyed this story and the accidental nature of the bi encounter which was a lovely fantasy. Well done!

Great story so sexy hard me stroking all the way to the end but had to stop to prevent myself going over the edge to soon. Hope there will be a follow up part 2 of the return journey home.

Thanks for a deliciously erotic tale!!! A real turn on!! Excellent writing!