All Comments on 'Part-Time Job'

this was way to real for me to find it erotic. i just spent the whole story hating Gil and wishing bad things would happen to him. but i give you credit for writing a story that realistically reflected how this kind of sex goes down in real life.

i think i'll go read something from the romance genre now...

dark.....but well written and descriptive...

Some readers may find this story disturbing because it's so realistic. There's a reason for that--some portions are based on real life. It's categorized as a non-consent story because that's exactly what it is. This writing was never intended to be about romance. If it seems harsh or depressing, well, sometimes LIFE is just that way.