All Comments on 'Party Time Hot Wife'

to dumb to read

The fuckin, & uckin, just got too complecated tokeep track of who was doing what. Good tale as far as the action goes.

Learning how to use possessives would do wonders for your writing. Your story is getting lost by poor grammar, because it becomes a chore to read.

Enjoyed your story. Grammer, possessives? Not sure what that's all about? Probably someone who can't get a hard on.

Could not get past the first paragraph witch described the "wife" in most unflattering terms. Wy does anyone have to read further when you already know everything you need to know about this slut. And the husband must be brain damaged to enjoy sloppy seconds or more likely, fifths. YUK.

Dont be so hard on yourself anonymous. You're not that dumb. Sure you failed to capitalize the first letter of your sentence and you forgot the period at the end but your spelling was spot on unlike the other anonymous letters.

Great story. My wife and I have had many such parties ourselves. When you have a wife like that the only thing that you can do is share and in joy the adventures.

Just a question: His wife is a whore, he doesn't respect or lover her, so why not make some money with it? He could be her pimp and they would make a lot of money...The last sentence says this is their way: "Jefferson is having a bachelor party for one of his friends and wants Brandi to "perform." Sounds like it should be fun..."!!!! 1*

Fun story. Enjoy life. This sounds like a great party. For the uptight folks, this is what your wife is doing behind your back because you suck in bed (no creativity, no passion, no sense of adventure).

Wow

straight story of wife sharing and as usual all guys fucking her as rabbits. it was a pleasure to me too