All Comments on 'Passion and Lust 05'

Interesting ideas and development, please continue with the series.

This was a beautiful story!

I do admit that I was hoping for a threesome there (although really, it would involve the two not-goddesses hyper-pleasuring each other and between them sparing just enough attention to Allen to make him permanently lose his mind.

This was possibly one of the greatest short novels I have ever read. The development the protagonist. The antagonist. The other realistic characters. Serinity. I have read all of your stories. But this series definitely takes the cake. Also... Pussy juices making a trip to the dick.... Fucking GENIUS!

This may have been one of the best short stories I've ever found, and I sure didn't expect to find anything of this caliber on literotica of all places. You were wonderfully descriptive and the entire plot was amazing, like I said it was all very unexpected.

Go write more! You have talent and I would hate to see it go unused!

After all these years, this is a story I come back to. This would make one helluva a porn movie. One with a plot line outside of the sex! 10/10