All Comments on 'Passions And Fears Are Contagious'

Not much to this story. Not very clever. Not very imaginative. Your prose/dialogue seemed preachy. It sure wasn't any fun or entertaining to read. When you catch your breath, re-read this sorry tale. You'll see how bad it was.

A dressing with olive oil, vinegar, honey and mustard is of french origin, cerytainly not german.

Double Yuck.

Very difficult to understand what was going on especially since the author often used the wrong names and did not always clearly indicate what was and was not dialogue. In need of very, very serious editing - spelling, punctuation, omitted words, etc.

This is terrible

I was confused by the characters; Sue's husband was Jim then Rick. Jim was Rick's son somewhere but Bobby was Sue's son. German potato salad? It came made with mayonnaise in Frankfurt (not Frankfort). Otherwise I enjoyed what it could have been.

Your name should be IBarf! this story was horrible! YOU can't even see where you've changed YOUR characters names around, have a real good think before submitting again.

I got totally confused as to who was who, but not, I suspect as confused as you. Aside from screwing the names of your characters up beyond recognition, you misused and misspelled a lot of words. Get an editor and try again. You do have an interesting imagination.

MichaelG

They do have a section for gay stories, don't you know?

By then you'll come to your senses and delete this pile of navel-gazing horeshit.

This properly seems more a lesbian story then LW. If you wish to rescue this travesty then hubby needs to discover her cheating and burn the bitch. BTB. If you want to score extra points he burns his bitch AND all the bitches that she cheats on him with.

I liked the story...you just need to work on the editing. You can update this and send it again...would really love to see the new version. But keep the sexy premise. Love the erotic ideas...

Keep writing!

Stephen

one of the worst ever!

a 1 for sure, if you can tell me one good thing about this story then youo are an idiot

A warning at the start would have saved me from wasting my time on

this tale. get a divorce if you hate your marriage and want to be gay.

That was a total pile of crap. You are one pretentious asshole.

More like a lecture than a story, sorry