All Comments on 'Pathetic Ch. 05: Dating'

by kipp412

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
OMG

Your ending had me screaming! I honestly thought he was making out with Brett then BAM! not Brett. Poor Lucca, he must be heartbroken. As a woman, i just wanna hug him to my chest and let him bawl it out. Poor baby. If Brett really was 'moving on', which i'm sure he wasn't, he was really really quick to do so. Ass. Still, i am LOVING this story, wish the chapters were posted more frequently but they are actually pretty fast. Ignore me, im selfish hehehe. Keep up the good work :)

chrisunderchrisunderover 8 years ago
Well I can't blame Brett though...

He might knew already that the chances of them getting back together were pretty slim so he might have tried moving on especially now that Lucca pushed him away completely.

judojonjudojonover 8 years ago

So can not wait till the next chapter . Hope you are hard at it . Really a good read

vibhor19vibhor19over 8 years ago
Please can't wait no more!

I'm so bloody hooked to this!

Its been a while now, post the next part please?

Pretty please?

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