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Click hereLooking back at them I smiled and said, "Well our card games are certainly going to be different from now on," then I laid back and sighed.
- COMMENTS
noid12561almost 16 years agoThis is a very VISUAL story. I can see the ladies by the pool on the couches, floor and bed. One of the best I have read in 4 years.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoDespite the previous comments about grammer, I loved your story, and the people's attitude about sex. Keep writing.
June_Mayalmost 16 years agoBesides the "tough guy" crap, the sex wasn't too bad. But get it straight - re-read the shower scene and decide if it's "you" to whom this is happening, or "him."
Or did you just change "some story" (yours or someone you plagiarized?) from third person to first person and forget to clean up the loose ends?
