by pjlush
I loved the story, and seduction is my favorite.
The characters were very believable.
One thing though, is calling each other "babe" became pretty tiresome after a very short while. I'd moderate or even better, eliminate that.
I would have enjoyed a short vignette about Robert as he re-entered the party, explained to his wife where he'd been and why he looked so wild.
The story might have lent itself to at least one of the guys cumming in her cunt, and maybe even John eating a creampie, either Robert's or his own.
The characters and situation lend itself to a series of stories of seduction.
Maybe next, as they leave the room, Paula could now challenge John to seduce Robert's wife, fuck her, and bring Paula her panties!
You got your time frame mixed up . Married 6 years and she told Robert he was her second cock in 9 years. So much for a garbage story. Now they are going to be swingers.