All Comments on 'Pay It Forward Ch. 02'

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2275jr2275jrabout 11 years ago
another fantastic story line

the writing is awesome . dont know how you think of these stories .

but i fine them amazing. way the story line go's . keep them coming .

my few words for a great writing promise .

LeFrog08LeFrog08about 11 years ago
I'm hooked

and want to read more. I believe in the pay-it-forward principle. Thanks for this, Ir2r.

teedeedubteedeedubabout 11 years ago
Great story

Keep 'em coming. Can't wait to see where you go with this.....

donaldedonaldeabout 11 years ago
good chapter

can not wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Michal? I hate it when a character has some name that's hard to pronounce in my head.

Is it supposed to be Michael or is it something like mick-ull? Crap like that puts me right off reading a story. Shoulda just called the kid Bob.

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