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Click here"Is everything, alright here? Kara? Denzel?" he asked.
Denzel became aggressive. "Look son. I'm talking to my woman. Step off."
Gianni knew she hadn't told anyone about him, but to be disrespected in such a way hurt. Kara saw the hurt in his eyes and for the first time, she decided to stand up for what was right. She moved over to Gianni and hugged him, looked back at Denzel and stated loudly. "I'm not yours. I'm his. Step off Denzel and take Opie with you." And she kissed him in front of everyone.
Her friends were dumbfounded. Denzel and Timothy left. And soon, Gianni found himself alone in the food court with his woman, the mother of his child, in his arms.
"You know what you just did right?" he asked smiling.
"Yes, I just made myself the target girl for everybody that has an issue with a black girl dating a white boy." She answered sadly. Gianni held her a bit tighter.
"True, but you also just gave me street cred. You know I'm going to have to learn how to fight now, right. I can't have these men trying to take my woman." he joked as he gently carressed her cheek. "But baby, I'll slay as many dragons as I have to too be with you." He kissed her, and in that moment for the two of them, the world around them ceased to exist.
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I hope you enjoyed meeting Gianni and his love. Their story is not over. This is just the beginning of these two. Thank you for reading, and please remember to vote and comment. IR2R
I've read all 7 chapters up to this point, and I do enjoy the overall story. However, I would encourage you to get an editor to help you with the writing some. You consistently use wrong words and sometimes fragment sentences that break the flow of the story somewhat. A great story, though. It just needs someone to help you polish it up.
After reading part 7. the story still hold me to want to read on to chapter 8 .
so far this story has being like a journey through life . at time dull but then things change to being exciting as of this part of chapter seven ,
like that book you some times fine and begin to read not able to stop till that last page id read . now comes to your stories . they have the kind of magic.
of being spell bound to read right up the the end of part after part. then wishing for more . that how i see your stories. so look forward to each new one. as i sure their will be many more flowing from your pen . so to speak . keep up the great work of writing . you are a born writer ,
Just read the chapters up to here. I like it. What a great group of characters. Thanks