All Comments on 'Payal ki Jhankar Ch. 10'

You made us wait for a long time and then hit an absolute home run. A detailed and excellent story that while somewhat dark, moves the dial forward. Awaiting the next chapter.

This is a masterpiece! But please don't wait so long between updates!

After waiting for so long u finally hit bull's eye wd dis master piece. Don't know y r da ratings so less for such an awesome story. N please I beg of u to nt make us wait so long again for the next chap. Even more interested to know payal's course of revenge against haqnawaz. Please come soon. Please!!!!!

a beautifully crafted story.. just dont ruin it with any rape or sodomasochistic revenge in coming package :)

Hey ive been a follower of dis story of urs since last 2 years. While it has fascinated me alongwith many other fans of urs i'd request u to cum back soon n nt make us wait for 6 long months again. Its very hard to keep a track of any updates if it takes soo long n den v do forget wher da story ws headed n also da characters. U maybe busy wd ur schedule n work bt if ders a chance u can cum back soon i'd b hoping for it. Love ur writing n imagination.

please please please come back soon enough. i just can't wait for the next chapter. what would payal do now? dying to know the direction after shahanawaz's untimely death. real pleasure to read your story. great writer with a very imaginative mind

This really is a lovely story. Have given it 5 stars! However I do have some problems with the narrative.

1) Payals motivations! She loves her husband yet cheats on him. Or do they have some sort of agreement to have an open marriage? There are hints this may be the case but perhaps a flashback to when the two had a talk on having an open marriage, would be helpful.

2) As a woman, I find it a bit difficult to imagine how a woman could absolutely and totally love a man yet at the same time cheat on him without his okay or permission. This may be possible for a man to do, for a woman it is not as easy or likely.

3) a little more backstory on Payal would be nice to read.

Regardless, this is one of the best stories I have ever read on literotica.

Why the hell do you come with a chap after more than 6 long months and just vanish all of a sudden.. It's so difficult to catch up with the characters again after sucha long time. So do your loyal readers a favor and complete the the whole story with as many chaps as you want and only then do post it on literotica. Infact this way you'd be getting better ratings for your story too. Do take it as a sincere advice from your well wisher and and a loyal reader of your stories.