All Comments on 'Payal Submits'

Enough of your nonsense.

Stop writing.

Is there an Indian story anywhere on this site that is not exactly like this? Cheating wife and cuck hubby. WTF! 1* for putting the same old crap out here again. Nothing changes but the names. Formulaic garbage

a nice way to start, waiting for more to come.

Keep writing!

positive remarks on his/her story.What a shame

no fun

Really awesome...please dont mind the mostly stupid comments here. Keep writing . You have an exceptional flair for writing...please add a little more description of payel at times...like how she wears her attire,if she wears a saree whether it is too much below the navel,how many ornaments does she wear being a married lady,etc...too good stuff,please do continue.Be a regular and continue with Payels sexcapades

Nice writing... Keep it up & if anyone has great stories with cuckold theme mail me at mittapalleashok@gmail.com

Very nice story, eagerly waiting for next part. give more details.

let them go shopping in the car and then sitting with her Salwar open and then getting fucked in the car . Keep Going...................

hot

U made my dick hard baby

All the stories of this author are copied.

Well written. Use Indian Fuck word like chodo mujhe instead of fuck me, lund and chutt etc.Will be more believable.

Imagine an Indian girl using teh word mama - thats uncle for us. do a search and the heroine becomes Jennifer in another website with the story being written in 1989 -- ok Inidan- we know who copies what now!

Please continue

Violence against women is never erotic

Hadd hai neechta ki. Yeh story likhne wala apni ma behan ko bhi chod dega. Lahnat hai tujh par kutte