All Comments on 'Payment in Full Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
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DO CHAPTER 3 GREAT STORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
blahh

Fucking retarded. I hated it all the way through until I came in my pants. Bastard!lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
really good

i really loved this story however i found that in this story and in the first story in the series that you wrote the word 'hiss' and 'hissing' a lot of times and it was very off putting

billxxxooobillxxxoooalmost 7 years ago
Two sisters are better than one.

I'm surprised Jonathan took Claire again rather than Amanda since he'd already had Claire before and would have her for another eleven sessions. Maybe he's got some plan to have Amanda service him later on.

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