by BigGuy33
Unrealistic, and naive.
To be expected from a author that usually writes disgusting cheating stories.
Is this really written by Big Guy weak wimpy cuckold....or by a ghost writer....looks like the latter
Looks like the little anonymous boys had to play!
Thank you Big Guy, most of us are adult enough to routinize a good tale - 5 stars.
somewhere east of Omaha
Just terrific. Very well done etc,etc. I am a shut-in 90 year old widower and appreciate all your stories which I read, .over and over again. Third or fourth time through your whole list, and just want you to know.
Anonymous 6 months ago really is childish, this sight is obviously too grownup.
Well done Big Guy
Enjoyed it but two days from "your pervert homeless fantasy" to "shut up and kiss me" just doesn't feel right. This portion should be filled out more to sound believable.
Bit heart stings as these go, but put together quite nicely, nice character development
No sex maniac, cheating wives, no wimpy husbands, are you sure you wrote this or perhaps you were on something.
Why dislike?!
What happened to Carlos and the other two?!
They manhandled and hurt him.
Deserve Big time hurt!!!
BUT nothing mentioned.
Lucky if only intensive care
Lovely story, thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you.
General comment about writers on these sites. Why so many girl children? It is amusingly rare that boys crop up in the stories.
An unbelievably good story. I cried like a baby several times during the reading. The character development and the description of each person’s feelings was simply wonderful. This is one of my all time favorites. I would give this 10-😊’s if I could, but 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s will have to do.
Bravo!!
I have to admit, a small tear ran down my cheek. A lovely romantic story.
You write well, thank you
Should have filed assault charges against the goons that knocked Henry out and restrained him against his will! Also accused Carlos of kidnapping her. Make life interesting for them.
Good story. Thanks John.
Very well done. Touching and yet not saccharine. That’s a knife edge balance.
Read again. Helluva ride. Five stars.
Gotta say, come in the door like that in TX you might get met with shotgun blasts. Long as the occupant doesn’t do it in a Democrat city, he or she will be fine.
I'm not crying, you're crying. Oh wait, yes I am. Wonderful story, just so perfect in every way. Thank you for sharing - gb