All Comments on 'Pennies'

Really great story, thank you.

Even the way Rochelle got her father involved was creative! This is a wonderful story about the goodness in people.

Paperback romance quality without a doubt BUT we're lucky enough to enjoy it here!!

It is so refreshing reading a story about True Love - what Love is all about. This was a real Romance story...and I really enjoyed it. Thank you so very much for brightening up a rainy, dreary Wednesday.

Many thanks, some great ideas well executed here, and entertaining read.

I just finished this story and I have tears running down my face.

Job well done.

A thoroughly enjoyable and moving love story. Hats off to you and I look forward to reading your future works.

Just wonderful, BigGuy!

Just a couple of VERY minor quibbles:

Her FATHER gave permission to use “any means necessary?” – Doesn’t the LAW have something to do with that?

“I allowed Carlos to bring me to see daddy because they'd have hurt Henry if I didn't” – Then they hurt him anyway! Maybe not as badly as they would have, but still!

In a private home, isn't it a "bathroom", not a "restroom"?

8 miles was very good but this is, if possible, even better.

Thank you for the story even if you made my eyes water.

The two protagonists are among the most lovable characters I have run across at Literotica.

WOW

All I can say

I gave it a 5.

I really enjoyed it until Carlos showed up the story took a turn. It may have been better if you ended it at that point because after that, I wasn't emotionally involved.

Gave it a 5

I loved your story.

What a lovely story!

I have read many stories here at Literotica.com and so many of them offer up a death by sleepy semi driver and his big rig. It's almost like a virus going around from story to story. Or the story editors all recommend it. Just curious.

A wonderful story, BTW, and look forward to more.

I was hooked on this story pretty early. I kept waiting for the sex but when it arrived, it seamed rushed and a little awkward. A few lines with a sudden change in language made it feel like a beautiful non-erotica romance story with a couple sex scenes haphazardly dropped in.

Loved it though. Had me in tears at some points. Thank you

5*

Great story BG. Thought it was going to be predictable but you got me. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

I have a couple of small quibbles, primarily based on Rochelle's initially very cautious nature going over so suddenly, but that's author's choice. I actually thought that the story was too short, in that regard.

I had a bit of a problem with Rochelle's father being the generous billionaire, yet also being so overwhelmingly controlling; I didn't think that fit. Nevertheless, I gave the story a 5; it was a very good read, and the author conveyed the emotionalism very well.

I loved it this is my first erotic story I've ever read and it was awesome

I loved that this story was more about good things happening to good people than gratuitous sex, that is also ok. Great, believable characters doing wonderful things for less fortunate others always makes a good read.

Thanks for your efforts to entertain, you did well.

Brilliant story. Let us have more like that.

Dann you, you made this old married man cry

within a hard luck story.

I don't understand the comment about lunch at a Greek restaurant. If the food was too bland, they ordered the wrong items.

I will pass this on to my few reader-friends.

Absolutely loved the entire story!

A little rushed when dealing with "Daddy"... overall, a well-told tale worth 5 stars.

Thank you.

So many tear jerking moments! I love the title

You're the new MM! He should have had Carlos and the goons arrested. And sued the shit out of her Father. It's called assault, battery and possibly illegal restraint. The threat of the scandal would have been worth big money for her Father to pay out to keep it out of the Press. And when she came back? He should have shut the door in her face. She's completely out of his league and even a marginally smart man would know they had no future together. Hell, he'd be lucky if Carlos didn't show up and kill him. Idiotic ending.

....doesn't mean he can break the law and assault and kidnap someone.

Would be good to spread the story and photos of what happened in the media. Perhaps get Rochelle to share some tidbits of private life among billionaires.

Use that as leverage to get a little skin back for breaking the law.

Nice story, cute but not real. Again you seem to have a very unrealistic idea about what love is. That said it was enjoyable.

Shhh, don't tell Stangstar, but I liked yours better.

This is a good one BG.... I see some cheap, negative comments.... pay them no mind....

Not ashamed to admit this one started some waterworks, outstanding story.

for folks on earth, TK U MLJ LV NV

I wish there were more of them on here...

I think people need more positive things to read. It was nice to see two marriages that were formed from love and it was only death that separated the first one.

I recently lost my wife of 50 years and so am in a rather fragile state at times. You have no idea how much it moved me and I read most of it through a veil of tears. But thank you as I am finding that when I cry I come up feeling that bit better or stronger. It will never go away totally but I will heal

Again thank-you for such a moving story.

A touching emotional story. Thanks!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I admit a few misty eyed times because of it. Again thank you for this gift.

meets a great poor man TK U MLJ LV NV

That was a good story, and very emotional.

Very nice romance story and clever twist. McAnon sorry for your loss; glad BigGuy's story brought you some therapy.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this Story immensely Thanks ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT,ONE OF THE BEST STORIES IVE READ ON THIS SITE, GREAT ENDING,JUST GOING TO FIND ANOTHER TISSUE.

Only criticism about story I have is how fast they fell in love. 2-days is a bit short. I figure at least give them a week.

Also, in beginning Rochelle was people watching, which is fine. But she was pretty damn healthy and clean. No mention of her scarfing down meal at diner. No mention of bad smells from clothes. Very little “problems” of her being sexually assaulted at some point - which you’ve got to think happened to a small, but beautiful vagrant. Her homeless life was just too good.

Ok, that’s it. Even with flaws still a 5-star story to me.

I, to, think that two days is way too short for Rochelle to fall in love. Also, it was never said what happened to Henry. Did one of the large men hit him? If so, why wasn't

there any legal or physical response? Lastly, it seems to me that the University president (?) may have overstepped his authority, whether Mr. Morgan was a friend or not. How about determining if Rochelle wants to be "discovered" or not.

This second read, months later, still made me tear up a bit.

Well done.

Making a grown man's eyes water....Bravo

Nice story with just enough sex to keep it erotic. Will keep reading this author.

One request for future writing, though: Using "love" and "baby" after a meal and a couple of days around each other is, well, just not realistic. Those things come from familiarity and intimacy that just had not had enough time or circumstance to develop yet, especially for two "guarded" souls. Makes an otherwise enjoyable story overly "sappy." Well done, otherwise. 5☆

You got me right in the feelies, dammit.

This is a tearjerker/feelgood story of the highest order. Definitely worthy of a 5 star rating. The only thing I didn’t like about the story is that Henry didn’t go out and find “Carlos” and kick the holy cowboy shit out of him. You know, all in the spirit of friendship, and all that crap. Of course that’s probably just me. I do have a bit of a vindictive side. But hey, like I said, great story BigGuy33.

But it didn't work for me. I stopped half way through. I know it was supposed to be romantic, but felt way too forced and rushed. If I'm being honest, it felt kind of creepy.

Bravo, one of my favorite stories.....5

You make think you’re quite clever, but for most of us, all I can say is WTF does “TK U MLJ LV NV” mean? I’m pretty sure you meant it to be snarky, but you’re just not getting there.

...a bit corny. I read it nonetheless, and enjoyed it. Told my wife I was reading a Harlequin Romance, and she laughed.

Surprised by some grammar - perhaps it's 'murrican':

As is the case among most Lit authors, this one doesn't know the diff between lie and lay, nor the logical use of " 'name' and I" vs " 'name' and me".

Both misuses are major errors unless used as vernacular. Three of them would constitute a fail in an English test piece. Lots of them here.

Finally, confusion near the end: “Her little sister, Connie, just turned one and is giving us a run for our money and necessitated another move, to a much larger house out in the suburbs. She is repeatedly spoiled by her namesake aunt”. Her older sister is her aunt??

Author sure has an obsession with making babies. However, that’s his/her privilege.

Thanks!

I don't often get the feelings I got from this story but Thank You It was a true romance story of the very best kind, Well Written and 'decorated' with those shiny 'pennies' I particularly appreciated you keeping the sex scenes real.

5 magnificent *****

I enjoyed it quite a bit.

My late mother’s take on shiny new pennies came to mind while reading this story. She always said that if you saw a shiny new penny, it was someone that was close to you that had passed away saying hi and that they were all right. So when my mom passed away and then, a year later, my dad joined her, I kept seeing brand new pennies everywhere I went. Yes, I know I was just hypersensitive in terms of being on the lookout for them and the frequency of seeing them was likely the same, but it still, to this day, gives me some comfort to see a shiny new penny.

Thank you for writing a story that brings up some wonderful memories of my folks.

Yeah, and on a sex story site. Who’d would have thought?

The new wife is fantastic, no jealousy of the first wife and what she still means to her husband

A great story!

This story holds its own against 8 mile which is one of my favorite top 10 stories in here. Well done.

What more needs to be said

What a beautiful story and so well written well done to you

Well Done. 5*s

Just outstanding.

It went into my Favorite Stories.

Jeez! Perfect, just perfect. I am going to read the rest of your stories, but I expect to be disappointed after this one. Hope I am wrong, thanks.

BG33 has used in a couple stories the plot that a widower is promising his departed wife that he will hang on until he meets his departed in the next life (see "Wedding Day"). That saddens me. The widower should be thinking about how he will devote his life to his new wife and should want to be with her in the next life. The widower is really emotionally cheating on his new wife from the outset. If he cannot view his new wife as the one and only, then he should not be getting married. With whom will the new wife in the next life? Not sure threesomes would be palatable to either wife or to the higher authority.

Many homeless need a helping hand temporarily, but there are tons of homeless that want to live that way for drugs and alcohol. Sadly there are actual college courses today teaching young people how to beg and they do very profitably, but actually unneeded. The thousands of best students can make 300$ plus a day.

..::Just great! Thank you for making my day. Five enthusiastic stars ⭐️ for this one!

I really have no word to express myself towards the story. It's the best ever.

This is a story I read on YouTube last year, one of many that were posted there without, I assume, the original author's permission. It was heartwarming to read it again. At least I can compliment the original author this moving, well written story. BigGuy33 you have a wonderful talent. Please keep the stories coming, and thank you for sharing them with us. 5 STARS CC

A very good story.

WONDERFUL STORY! What was the movie this was based on?

Superb story!!! 5 Stars, wish I could give more...

I really enjoyed this story. I would have written the last encounter with the University President slightly different to show some of the rage Henry felt:

Dr. F could see I wasn't happy after his comment about scandals. My response wasn't very friendly. "I don't know what you did, but you better fix it because I'm going to beat you to within an inch of your life and make you beg me not to take the last inch!"

I would have loved to see the dad get sued stupid or some sort of scandal occur for having his men beat up a random person who did nothing but save his daughter from the streets. But not all stories can have a perfect ending

Wow! Brilliant heartwarming story.

What a warm and loving tale. Well Done 5 stars

Again a really warm endearing story. There really wasn't too much sex in it which was really good and appropriate to a story line. It was congruent without the 2 filtered by each other and was not simply thrown in as gratuitous porn. Extremely well done thank you for the story

The last pet of the story made me tear up. I guess I’m an old softy.

Wonderful story and it proves love has nothing to do with money. Rochelle actually was "married" to Henry within a week of being with him. As she told her father, she selected him to be the one to start her baby factory and give her half of the best titles you can have, WIFE and MOTHER. Mommy is probably the sweetest word, because she carried them inside her for 9 months...

Beautiful story, masterfully told. Made me tear up in several places. A wonderful story of romance and a found love!

Oh please "masterfully?" This was melodrama at it's finest. All these "baby and babies" puke.

Ss06 did this way way better. His I believed.

WOW.. it's a definitely a 5 star 🌟✴️🌟✴️🌟✴️🌟✴️🌟✴️. Thank you for your beautiful story. Ali from Singapore

Adding the drama to this story was unexpected and the reason for Rochelle's street life had nothing to do with what happens to too many homeless people. We see so many corners occupied by a man or woman with a sign asking for help that we have become immune to the sight and rarely slow down to offer help to someone who can get a job if they really wanted to get one. I have two centers in my area where I make regular, although small, contributions and still feel guilty. May there be a Liz's Pennie's for anyone who needs and wants shelter and a meal.

There was no need for any information about their physical acts because their emotional love was to clear just as it was clear to the reader about Henry's and Liz's love.

People come to Literotica for many reasons.

I come for Romance and this excellent story if a perfect example.

I just wish that any story posted in the Romance category had to truly be a Romance instead of basically an erotic coupling story.

Every bit as good as "The Promise! "

Thanks!!!

Good storey. Too sweet and too fast. Lets just say had it been dawn out over a longer period of time it would have been very good. Say he saw and helped Rochelle several times. Say he offered Rochelle a live in job of her being his house keeper and after a year they found they liked each other. Less sweetness more real life. Do people really get together and marry that quickly, I don't think so.

An outstanding story.

Okay! Okay! most of the comments explain why this is an all-time great 5* Romance and of course I agree. I think the few negative comments tell more about the people who made them than about the author and his stories. BigGuy33 has laid out his goals d was true to them. I think the lead male in this story is in a lot of ways about the heart of the author. He is not into hurt and vengeance, but love and good deeds.

However BigGuy I do have one little criticism. After making a big deal about the money for that first meal, you just dropped it. Was there change? Just like an almost perfectly knitted item, it is a tiny flaw that left me, at least, wondering.

The Hoary Cleric

I agree with the comment that said it all happened too fast. A good story but the speed of the courting (what courting) made the story line weaker. It could have been a very good story by slowing things down. Further, why did he not go to the police when she was basically kidnapped and he was assaulted. It seems to me he was knocked out. Unlike the movies/films this can cause lots of issues including concussion so again not real life.

Fantastic a really great story . I have read all the other comments that others have written and I still feel that the Author has covered every base and I think if each person really throughly read thought about the story they would see there was already an answer to there question/ criticism therefore there was already an answer to cover every point of criticism that has been raised . I would also just like point out that he never went to the police or did anything because Rochelle ask him to let her go as she would sort it . Also the dad had , had a few year to realise what he had lost and this had made him have a change of heart as far as generosity over amassed riches and all this nonsense about suing and reprisals goes against the very essence of who the couple really are as people . I think if I chose to, I could answer every single criticism that so called critiques have make even the one that was made about being with Liz after death he ment on a high plain not as his main partner and lastly two days might not be enough to fully fall in love although some would argue that it is , and I would not argue with them ,but what I would like to say is that sometimes you just met a person and you feel and know that you have that connection with each other that will become ultimate love ; I did with my wife before I even met her as we spoke on the phone to arrange a date (we spoke and spoke and neither of us want the call to end and we both felt that ultimate connection that would turn into love and bind us until this day ) after an introduction by dateline ( that’s a blast from the past that anyone who is over 55 might remember) a mail order dating line before the internet that matched you after you filled in a form with your likes and dislikes and preferences and they ran it through a computer, and match you to like wise people looking for a match to try and form a life long partnership with and in our case it worked as we have been married 35 years now so you can feel an instant life long connection with someone , so that blows the two days not being enough right out the window and I think that is what they had straight away so just knew they had found the love of their life and even if they weren’t in love knew it was to come and come it did so I will just say again that this a fantastically perfect story 100% 5 star ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Story no criticism can be founded as every i has been dotted and every t crossed .As I said before the Author has covered every base so there is no fault to be had . Just except and appreciate it as a perfect Story and be happy .

You cannot fully appreciate a good story when speedreading nor when you concentrate on finding fault as many commenters are doing. Also, just because YOU have never done something means NOTHING! I was with my wife for 20 years after the first night we met. We did finally divorce but 22 years after that we are still friends. This tale is perfect as written, 5 stars.

somewhere east of Omaha

Can't get much better than that. 5/5 One of the best romantic read on this site

2nd read for me and still brings "moisture" to my eyes

Although primarily it brings moisture to most people eyes it can also bring moisture some where else I’m sure a few ladies would agree with me may be not gushes but moisture all the same must go now and change my panties and may be some guys have to do the same as they have a little pre cum wet spots on their pants as well