All Comments on 'Pennies'

A very powerful story. Very well done!

I'm not crying, you're crying. Oh wait, yes I am. Wonderful story, just so perfect in every way. Thank you for sharing - gb

Pardon my tears. Great story. 5 stars at least.

Thank you for this very moving story Big Guy, 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

This truly a great story.

One of your better stories Mr BigGuy33!!

This story could be made into a movie....*5*+++++

Read again. Helluva ride. Five stars.

Gotta say, come in the door like that in TX you might get met with shotgun blasts. Long as the occupant doesn’t do it in a Democrat city, he or she will be fine.

Very well done. Touching and yet not saccharine. That’s a knife edge balance.

Moving story. Thanks.

Should have filed assault charges against the goons that knocked Henry out and restrained him against his will! Also accused Carlos of kidnapping her. Make life interesting for them.

Good story. Thanks John.

I have to admit, a small tear ran down my cheek. A lovely romantic story.

You write well, thank you

Brilliant, story was just right and not over played or too soppy. Keep them coming

An unbelievably good story. I cried like a baby several times during the reading. The character development and the description of each person’s feelings was simply wonderful. This is one of my all time favorites. I would give this 10-😊’s if I could, but 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s will have to do.

Bravo!!

Baby Baby Baby Baby

You use it so much that it gets annoying

Aw.. Well written and possibly one of your best!!

2nd reading for me and this is still a great story

Lovely story, thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you.

General comment about writers on these sites. Why so many girl children? It is amusingly rare that boys crop up in the stories.

Why dislike?!

What happened to Carlos and the other two?!

They manhandled and hurt him.

Deserve Big time hurt!!!

BUT nothing mentioned.

Lucky if only intensive care

Another cracking story with emotion.

Beautiful and romantic and wonderful story. Definitely a 5 star rating. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

A nice story. I agree things moved too fast.

Bill S.

Absolutely loved this story keep up the great work👍

Touching store. 5 solid gold Pennies!

Red8_2Play

No sex maniac, cheating wives, no wimpy husbands, are you sure you wrote this or perhaps you were on something.

Bit heart stings as these go, but put together quite nicely, nice character development

Enjoyed it but two days from "your pervert homeless fantasy" to "shut up and kiss me" just doesn't feel right. This portion should be filled out more to sound believable.

Anonymous 6 months ago really is childish, this sight is obviously too grownup.

Well done Big Guy

Just terrific. Very well done etc,etc. I am a shut-in 90 year old widower and appreciate all your stories which I read, .over and over again. Third or fourth time through your whole list, and just want you to know.

Nicely done.

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Tres Romantique!

11/10 Pennies!!!!!

Looks like the little anonymous boys had to play!

Thank you Big Guy, most of us are adult enough to routinize a good tale - 5 stars.

somewhere east of Omaha

Is this really written by Big Guy weak wimpy cuckold....or by a ghost writer....looks like the latter

Unrealistic, and naive.

To be expected from a author that usually writes disgusting cheating stories.

Although primarily it brings moisture to most people eyes it can also bring moisture some where else I’m sure a few ladies would agree with me may be not gushes but moisture all the same must go now and change my panties and may be some guys have to do the same as they have a little pre cum wet spots on their pants as well

2nd read for me and still brings "moisture" to my eyes

Can't get much better than that. 5/5 One of the best romantic read on this site

You cannot fully appreciate a good story when speedreading nor when you concentrate on finding fault as many commenters are doing. Also, just because YOU have never done something means NOTHING! I was with my wife for 20 years after the first night we met. We did finally divorce but 22 years after that we are still friends. This tale is perfect as written, 5 stars.

somewhere east of Omaha

Fantastic a really great story . I have read all the other comments that others have written and I still feel that the Author has covered every base and I think if each person really throughly read thought about the story they would see there was already an answer to there question/ criticism therefore there was already an answer to cover every point of criticism that has been raised . I would also just like point out that he never went to the police or did anything because Rochelle ask him to let her go as she would sort it . Also the dad had , had a few year to realise what he had lost and this had made him have a change of heart as far as generosity over amassed riches and all this nonsense about suing and reprisals goes against the very essence of who the couple really are as people . I think if I chose to, I could answer every single criticism that so called critiques have make even the one that was made about being with Liz after death he ment on a high plain not as his main partner and lastly two days might not be enough to fully fall in love although some would argue that it is , and I would not argue with them ,but what I would like to say is that sometimes you just met a person and you feel and know that you have that connection with each other that will become ultimate love ; I did with my wife before I even met her as we spoke on the phone to arrange a date (we spoke and spoke and neither of us want the call to end and we both felt that ultimate connection that would turn into love and bind us until this day ) after an introduction by dateline ( that’s a blast from the past that anyone who is over 55 might remember) a mail order dating line before the internet that matched you after you filled in a form with your likes and dislikes and preferences and they ran it through a computer, and match you to like wise people looking for a match to try and form a life long partnership with and in our case it worked as we have been married 35 years now so you can feel an instant life long connection with someone , so that blows the two days not being enough right out the window and I think that is what they had straight away so just knew they had found the love of their life and even if they weren’t in love knew it was to come and come it did so I will just say again that this a fantastically perfect story 100% 5 star ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Story no criticism can be founded as every i has been dotted and every t crossed .As I said before the Author has covered every base so there is no fault to be had . Just except and appreciate it as a perfect Story and be happy .

I agree with the comment that said it all happened too fast. A good story but the speed of the courting (what courting) made the story line weaker. It could have been a very good story by slowing things down. Further, why did he not go to the police when she was basically kidnapped and he was assaulted. It seems to me he was knocked out. Unlike the movies/films this can cause lots of issues including concussion so again not real life.

Okay! Okay! most of the comments explain why this is an all-time great 5* Romance and of course I agree. I think the few negative comments tell more about the people who made them than about the author and his stories. BigGuy33 has laid out his goals d was true to them. I think the lead male in this story is in a lot of ways about the heart of the author. He is not into hurt and vengeance, but love and good deeds.

However BigGuy I do have one little criticism. After making a big deal about the money for that first meal, you just dropped it. Was there change? Just like an almost perfectly knitted item, it is a tiny flaw that left me, at least, wondering.

The Hoary Cleric

An outstanding story.

Good storey. Too sweet and too fast. Lets just say had it been dawn out over a longer period of time it would have been very good. Say he saw and helped Rochelle several times. Say he offered Rochelle a live in job of her being his house keeper and after a year they found they liked each other. Less sweetness more real life. Do people really get together and marry that quickly, I don't think so.

Every bit as good as "The Promise! "

Thanks!!!

People come to Literotica for many reasons.

I come for Romance and this excellent story if a perfect example.

I just wish that any story posted in the Romance category had to truly be a Romance instead of basically an erotic coupling story.

There was no need for any information about their physical acts because their emotional love was to clear just as it was clear to the reader about Henry's and Liz's love.

Adding the drama to this story was unexpected and the reason for Rochelle's street life had nothing to do with what happens to too many homeless people. We see so many corners occupied by a man or woman with a sign asking for help that we have become immune to the sight and rarely slow down to offer help to someone who can get a job if they really wanted to get one. I have two centers in my area where I make regular, although small, contributions and still feel guilty. May there be a Liz's Pennie's for anyone who needs and wants shelter and a meal.

WOW.. it's a definitely a 5 star 🌟✴️🌟✴️🌟✴️🌟✴️🌟✴️. Thank you for your beautiful story. Ali from Singapore

Oh please "masterfully?" This was melodrama at it's finest. All these "baby and babies" puke.

Ss06 did this way way better. His I believed.

Beautiful story, masterfully told. Made me tear up in several places. A wonderful story of romance and a found love!

Wonderful story and it proves love has nothing to do with money. Rochelle actually was "married" to Henry within a week of being with him. As she told her father, she selected him to be the one to start her baby factory and give her half of the best titles you can have, WIFE and MOTHER. Mommy is probably the sweetest word, because she carried them inside her for 9 months...

The last pet of the story made me tear up. I guess I’m an old softy.

Again a really warm endearing story. There really wasn't too much sex in it which was really good and appropriate to a story line. It was congruent without the 2 filtered by each other and was not simply thrown in as gratuitous porn. Extremely well done thank you for the story

What a warm and loving tale. Well Done 5 stars

Wow! Brilliant heartwarming story.

I would have loved to see the dad get sued stupid or some sort of scandal occur for having his men beat up a random person who did nothing but save his daughter from the streets. But not all stories can have a perfect ending

I really enjoyed this story. I would have written the last encounter with the University President slightly different to show some of the rage Henry felt:

Dr. F could see I wasn't happy after his comment about scandals. My response wasn't very friendly. "I don't know what you did, but you better fix it because I'm going to beat you to within an inch of your life and make you beg me not to take the last inch!"

Superb story!!! 5 Stars, wish I could give more...

WONDERFUL STORY! What was the movie this was based on?

A very good story.

This is a story I read on YouTube last year, one of many that were posted there without, I assume, the original author's permission. It was heartwarming to read it again. At least I can compliment the original author this moving, well written story. BigGuy33 you have a wonderful talent. Please keep the stories coming, and thank you for sharing them with us. 5 STARS CC

I really have no word to express myself towards the story. It's the best ever.

..::Just great! Thank you for making my day. Five enthusiastic stars ⭐️ for this one!

Many homeless need a helping hand temporarily, but there are tons of homeless that want to live that way for drugs and alcohol. Sadly there are actual college courses today teaching young people how to beg and they do very profitably, but actually unneeded. The thousands of best students can make 300$ plus a day.

BG33 has used in a couple stories the plot that a widower is promising his departed wife that he will hang on until he meets his departed in the next life (see "Wedding Day"). That saddens me. The widower should be thinking about how he will devote his life to his new wife and should want to be with her in the next life. The widower is really emotionally cheating on his new wife from the outset. If he cannot view his new wife as the one and only, then he should not be getting married. With whom will the new wife in the next life? Not sure threesomes would be palatable to either wife or to the higher authority.

Jeez! Perfect, just perfect. I am going to read the rest of your stories, but I expect to be disappointed after this one. Hope I am wrong, thanks.

It went into my Favorite Stories.

Just outstanding.

Well Done. 5*s

What a beautiful story and so well written well done to you

What more needs to be said

This story holds its own against 8 mile which is one of my favorite top 10 stories in here. Well done.

A great story!

The new wife is fantastic, no jealousy of the first wife and what she still means to her husband

I enjoyed it quite a bit.

My late mother’s take on shiny new pennies came to mind while reading this story. She always said that if you saw a shiny new penny, it was someone that was close to you that had passed away saying hi and that they were all right. So when my mom passed away and then, a year later, my dad joined her, I kept seeing brand new pennies everywhere I went. Yes, I know I was just hypersensitive in terms of being on the lookout for them and the frequency of seeing them was likely the same, but it still, to this day, gives me some comfort to see a shiny new penny.

Thank you for writing a story that brings up some wonderful memories of my folks.

Yeah, and on a sex story site. Who’d would have thought?

I don't often get the feelings I got from this story but Thank You It was a true romance story of the very best kind, Well Written and 'decorated' with those shiny 'pennies' I particularly appreciated you keeping the sex scenes real.

5 magnificent *****

...a bit corny. I read it nonetheless, and enjoyed it. Told my wife I was reading a Harlequin Romance, and she laughed.

Surprised by some grammar - perhaps it's 'murrican':

As is the case among most Lit authors, this one doesn't know the diff between lie and lay, nor the logical use of " 'name' and I" vs " 'name' and me".

Both misuses are major errors unless used as vernacular. Three of them would constitute a fail in an English test piece. Lots of them here.

Finally, confusion near the end: “Her little sister, Connie, just turned one and is giving us a run for our money and necessitated another move, to a much larger house out in the suburbs. She is repeatedly spoiled by her namesake aunt”. Her older sister is her aunt??

Author sure has an obsession with making babies. However, that’s his/her privilege.

Thanks!

You make think you’re quite clever, but for most of us, all I can say is WTF does “TK U MLJ LV NV” mean? I’m pretty sure you meant it to be snarky, but you’re just not getting there.

Bravo, one of my favorite stories.....5

But it didn't work for me. I stopped half way through. I know it was supposed to be romantic, but felt way too forced and rushed. If I'm being honest, it felt kind of creepy.

This is a tearjerker/feelgood story of the highest order. Definitely worthy of a 5 star rating. The only thing I didn’t like about the story is that Henry didn’t go out and find “Carlos” and kick the holy cowboy shit out of him. You know, all in the spirit of friendship, and all that crap. Of course that’s probably just me. I do have a bit of a vindictive side. But hey, like I said, great story BigGuy33.

You got me right in the feelies, dammit.

Nice story with just enough sex to keep it erotic. Will keep reading this author.

One request for future writing, though: Using "love" and "baby" after a meal and a couple of days around each other is, well, just not realistic. Those things come from familiarity and intimacy that just had not had enough time or circumstance to develop yet, especially for two "guarded" souls. Makes an otherwise enjoyable story overly "sappy." Well done, otherwise. 5☆

Making a grown man's eyes water....Bravo

This second read, months later, still made me tear up a bit.

Well done.

I, to, think that two days is way too short for Rochelle to fall in love. Also, it was never said what happened to Henry. Did one of the large men hit him? If so, why wasn't

there any legal or physical response? Lastly, it seems to me that the University president (?) may have overstepped his authority, whether Mr. Morgan was a friend or not. How about determining if Rochelle wants to be "discovered" or not.

Only criticism about story I have is how fast they fell in love. 2-days is a bit short. I figure at least give them a week.

Also, in beginning Rochelle was people watching, which is fine. But she was pretty damn healthy and clean. No mention of her scarfing down meal at diner. No mention of bad smells from clothes. Very little “problems” of her being sexually assaulted at some point - which you’ve got to think happened to a small, but beautiful vagrant. Her homeless life was just too good.

Ok, that’s it. Even with flaws still a 5-star story to me.

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT,ONE OF THE BEST STORIES IVE READ ON THIS SITE, GREAT ENDING,JUST GOING TO FIND ANOTHER TISSUE.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this Story immensely Thanks ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

Very nice romance story and clever twist. McAnon sorry for your loss; glad BigGuy's story brought you some therapy.

That was a good story, and very emotional.

meets a great poor man TK U MLJ LV NV

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I admit a few misty eyed times because of it. Again thank you for this gift.

A touching emotional story. Thanks!

I recently lost my wife of 50 years and so am in a rather fragile state at times. You have no idea how much it moved me and I read most of it through a veil of tears. But thank you as I am finding that when I cry I come up feeling that bit better or stronger. It will never go away totally but I will heal

Again thank-you for such a moving story.

I think people need more positive things to read. It was nice to see two marriages that were formed from love and it was only death that separated the first one.

I wish there were more of them on here...

for folks on earth, TK U MLJ LV NV

Not ashamed to admit this one started some waterworks, outstanding story.

This is a good one BG.... I see some cheap, negative comments.... pay them no mind....