All Comments on 'Perfect Harmony'

ok maybe I missed it but when did you dump john? face sitting, no clothing

please and not every time we play either. change is the thing to do.

for a short tale this is ok.

I liked it but there seemed to be bits missing. You ought to proof read at least, there are some silly mistakes. eg; threw not through. Quote; 'it makes you Cary apprehensive', what's that supposed to mean? and there are more.

and, even though I am not into political correctness there is something about reading " in bed with a coloured guy" that is considerably offputting. It remains so in spite of the British spelling of coloured. Just something out of line about this entire effort.

but it's a fuck session NOT a romance...