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- Pergamon
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I panicked, quickly rushing down the remaining stairs. I had to make a run for it. I could hear him turning towards me, and Danielle's surprise as he pulled his cock from her. I was about to leap to the floor and make my escape when my own trousers tripped me, and I fell, skidding on the marble floor, breaking myself with my hands.
I was on the floor, my trousers a treacherous mess around my knees when I felt a big dark shadow looming over me. A powerful fist grabbed my shoulder and pinned me to the floor as something cold, wet and very hard touched my naked bum.
"Fuck," I quickly thought to myself, "fucking ancient Greece."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 9 years agocleverly conceived and written, although may have less impact on those not fortunate enough to have visited the pergamon - which, I see, is now closed for 5 years of remodeling; a bit of background woven into the opening of the story might have made it stronger... or arguably might have gone over heads here.
one minor quibble, since you chose your site as what is generally regarded as the highest achievement of the Hellenistic greeks, i found the closing ref to the ancients a bit jarring, while they worked in the general themes of the ancient greeks, their achievements were the manifestation of the decidedly different post Alexandrian era -
note to readers thinking of trying if for themselves - while I've spent many an enjoyable night bivouacking with the gods in temples/ruins across greece, where the guards used to go home promptly at quitting time, if not before, the much tighter ass krauts didn't provide the leeway for such indulgences in berlin, not even during the entertaining confusion after reunification.
Englishvoyeurabout 10 years agoThat's a great start to a story and very much like a fantasy I've entertained. Looking forward to part 2
