All Comments on '"Pet Mommy": DP Mommy-Slut!'

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Your stories are great! May be you could introduce some Bondage into them. Especially Ring gags then a hole isn't used up.

I love to share my slut with my best friends, I like to watch them smile as they get serviced like never before.

The story is very good, but when your son starts sharing you with his best friend and you gave his best friend control over you the same control that Michael has he can slut you off to other people and the list can go on to infinity.

Leave it all in the family. I know you can write a fantastic story leaving it in the family.

Amazing. Such a lovely debauched mind you have. I couldn't decide between "depraved" and "debauched", to be honest, but debauched just sounds so much more wicked.

Hot asf, Mommy sluts are super hot

uff double fucked the bitch mommy what a good story

Damn! Hot as the rest! Looking forward to the next one! Definitely about Crystal... but, would've loved some about flashback stories of secret sexcapades between son and friend prior to this, and back to present with them sucking each other off after fucking Pet Mommy... and of the boys doing each other for Mommy Slut to watch, and for her to clean them off afterwards!

Yon can not share out side of the family, to risky. I really enjoy the mother though.

"Real men share their prized possessions with a trusted few who appreciate the trust of friendship" nothing better than the confidence of sucking a friend' dick after he fucks your wife, right?

You should make the mom pregnant with either her son baby or Fredrick’s since one they didn’t use condoms and she never said if she was on birth control or had a iud in or every bought the morning after pill this reminds me of my boss she got pregnant with her son four years ago and she said she never expected to get pregnant again and I’m like yeah she never used protection and heck with her now flirting with her boyfriend and her son she never uses protection heck it has me wondering what next my boss announces she pregnant

Love the "real men don't share" BS from the lonely commentors Real men share their prized possessions with a trusted few who appreciate the trust of friendship.

Real men share and enjoy it.

This author like so many others that post on the side have no clue what incest is really about. People who were involved in incest don't tell anybody else outside the family and certainly don't share with other people outside the family, it's too risky. Plus people that are involved in a incest relationship become obsessed with each other to the point that they don't like sharing with other people, so this is just another childish fantasy that doesn't even come near reality, which makes the better fantasy stories.

Interesting but I think it would be better to skip the sharing altogether. Most men, unless involved in porn, would not share. Plus no matter what is said in the heat of the moment, it is too risky outside of the immediate family.

I enjoy dom/sub (son/mother) incest stories. Having participated in a few menage et trios", I have never trusted anyone to the extent that I would allow such activity with a nonincestuous member.

Adding Frederick fuckin sucked. Real men don't share

You have built up a great story, even able to capture the essence of what it would be like for a nerdy guy to have a life-changing experience like fucking his mother or having his friend fuck his mother.

Most other stories like this here, have the son go from nerdy to master dom in two paragraphs and the friend to be hung like a horse and already know how to be a stud.

I will also say you handled the third wheel very well, how to bring in the friend into the story.

Finally, I often wonder why people read stories as if they were documentaries... This was pure male fantasy and as this genre goes, very well done.

sharing ur women is big no for me. one dick is enough in a story. if it was another women i would welcome anytime.

idk why many author wrote like this. it makes readers lose interest no matter how good a story is.

for me this story was 5 star until a thid wheel appear. now its not even worth 1 star.

this sexy story gets better ,when i was young i got to see my mother my aunt her sister,my sister and my cousin all naked in our sauna ,i already knew what girls were about.

not incest and included cuckold? one star

wow this story gets better and better an't wait to read more with cock in hand

Frederick should just be a Dog. it would 100% fit better to the story.

Wow thanks… K London

Loved it. Thanks for the fantasy. I’m reading ALL your stories now...

Incest is keeping it in the family. What happened in this part made me lose interest.

Good story line up to the sharing point then I lost interest, will see what the other chapters have

People reading for incest reasons don’t want an outsider to join in. Family only. It’s your story of course but giving this other boy the same power to have mom whenever destroyed story. Couldn’t read anymore. PS I’m not trying to hide name just don’t have account yet.

You lost me with this story. Absolutely no tender love what so ever I stopped reading when you added Fredrick into it. Was a possible ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ story up until then..⭐️

Sharing is bad.

Dear Jaz,

A new style (keep it going - love it). Introduction of some new conclusions (both boys). Thank you for stepping out with those (perhaps this will lead to introduction of other new conclusions over the next little while).

This is a superb piece... great plot, correct combination of characters, right length, too.

It's obvious, you can extend this plot, or leave it as is.

A good, erotic (hot. sexy. horny, and more (read dirty)... SUPERB ! ! !

Love You, Jack Auff x o

So far, some of the best I ever read!

If you do happen to do a follow up story, I too am in agreement with some of the others... Kill of Frederick, he’s not needed. Let only him dominate mum and crystal then that would be a ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story

Loved the story line in the beginning, but when Frederick appeared, I knew you were going to go the way you did and that has spoiled the story for me even though I still gave you 5 stars, GET RID of Frederick from all future chapters in this story as he's not needed, if any DP's are to be carried out then get a strap on for mum or daughter where they can DP each other when the son fucks them. That all thanks catch you on the flip side. bye bye.

I liked it, but I like incest stories that bring other members of the family in especially the grandmother or sister, which from reading this I assume that's next. I'm just not turned on by someone joining who's not in the "family". I liked the first part, but didn't read anything that involved his friend other then when she gave him a bj before Fredrick came upstairs.

Keep writing though, it's just my 2 cents worth...

When mom takes on two cocks get fucked good and her ass and cunt fucked raw you kno the boys fucked her good.i should know my mom has set of double js on her and one hell of a hairy cunt goes from top of her cunt to her asshole my friens and i fucked her till she was so raw her cunt and ass used real good we end up getting each of friends moms too.then we had surprise from the moms even mine.that each one of them was pregnant we all yelled yes.one i got pregnant her name was Kay had bleach blonde hair dark hairy cunt where it stuck out 3in.she told way to go stud i am carrying your baby and i said yes.we told all the moms leave your husbands move in together one big house which they Kay slept with me mom slept my as did the other moms there 6 of them besides us we all get together fuck the moms every day even gangbang them too.kay she has been the only one to have three cocks in her cunt and me in her ass we totally destroyed her holes we had her screaming so loud she passed out we even filmed her we watch all the cum leak out of her ass and cunt

To think the son loves his mother as the plot of your story but after only a few days has her sucking and fucking his nerd friend is stupid and totally unbelievable. She would have to be a really dumb mother to think her stupid 18 year old son would look after her best interest when he even broached the topic of her fucking his friend...I just bet you would trust any 18 year old other than maybe your son to keep that secret....just really a dumb scernero

The DP part was awesome.

I had to seduce my daughter for my son I am his slut

'You Ruined The Story' got it exactly right. The whole story vibe was screwed the minute you added Frederick to the equation. Logically, there is no way the relationship will remain a secret after that. Plus, the whole 'mom is my slave' vibe was destroyed when she was given a SECOND master who will definitely be found out by some of the other nerds who will notice the change in his demeanor. His need for respect from his fellow nerds, coupled with the fact that it's not HIS mom that will be exposed, will have him bragging that he's screwing a hot older milf, and his fellow nerds will figure out who it is. (It may not be written that way, but that's exactly what would happen in a real-life circumstance. Had it been me, I would have kept my mom to myself FOREVER.)

i may or may not have a hot english teacher too who i want to fuck...(miss windridge) say miss w in chat if u know her

As usual ....your submissions took me ...waiting to read more about crystal

You ruined the story by adding Fredrick into it there was no need to add another male into the story.

Seducing & training son In pet mommy and submitting to son in DP mommy invovling son's friend is very nice. Keep writing to seduce daughter with giving training to have bro, friend and mom in to the incest.

All these Anons saying that Frederick "ruined" the story are pussies. This was an excellent addition, and I actually enjoy that aspect. the more the merrier I say.

Sharing his mother really destroyed this story.

A sub cannot have two masters, it just doesn't work. Frederick's short appearance in this story already has him more comfortable and more dominant than Michael. He merely received a blowjob, and immediately took control, where it took Michael days to get near doing the same. Michael seems almost submissive to his friend, and not a confident 'master'.

You can only have ONE master in the story, otherwise it fails. If you feel you need Frederick for the story, then just have him as the buddy along for the ride, not as another master. He should only have access to Betty with her son's permission, not hers. She is the submissive, after all, and Michael is supposedly the one in charge.

Sharing his mother with his friend is the worst idea ever! Since males are rivals when it comes to the sexual/love life, just the fact that the son suggested to share his mother with another male is just wrong on a whole new level. The way you delivered a DP was the wrong way, if you had delivered it as one of the greatest fantasies of the mother, and just a one time thing, it could have worked. Sharing sex with other males goes against the male instinct to spread his genes and block other males.

I am ready to read about daughter and mom and son no more Frederick.

i did not like Fredrick it made the story seem wrong

I would have preferred you didn't have Frederick participating in this story. I hope it's just a family affair in the next chapter...fuck Frederick off, best friend or not he thinks more of his friend than he does for his mother ..mum and sister only for me....I'm sure this will be a 5 star story for most people but for me this time round 4 stars only.. Sorry..

I want micheals big dick up my pussy

Not just the hot slut mother, who craves the thick, long, hard cock of young men. But also the building bi play of the two stud lovers.

Good story.

Don't like her submitting that much to Freddy and calling him Master.. that should only be used for her son HER MASTER.. anyone else should always be Sir or Miss or Maam.

I would like for you to just keep everything in the family. If others are added, just make them females.

So far I have enjoyed your story. It is so hot and descriptive. I enjoy stories of mother and daughter much more than mother and son, but this one is great.

DP means double penetration (a penis in the vagina and the ass.

"Pet Mommy": DP Mommy-Slut!

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Please translate into Spanish : "Pet Mommy": DP Mommy-Slut ! === ???

In particular, what is the meaning of DP?

Maybe Mab7991 ought to have checked the spelling of Shelley's name. But even good spelling can't make a mediocre story with no style a story worth reading.

It would have been better if Michael had not let Frederick gain mastery over his mom. I could stand her seducing Frederick on her own, and gaining mastery over him by telling Frederick she would tell Michael that he was fucking her, but that's about as far as I could see her go -- at least until she had worked out how she was going to do her daughter on Michael's orders.

I can't control even I'm in office. Keep going u r best of the best jasmine. Going to read next story but not now bcoz ur stories making me tired. After my recovery I'm going to tired soon.

Loved it until, Frederick spoilt it for me. ONE master only and that is the son

any pet will tell you they serve only one master.... when Frederick said that bit about masters i got pissed. he needs to go. it was nice that his friend shared his mom n got him laid but thats all it should be....

I agree. Frederick should be out. As with the comments below, Mom just became a plaything that you pass around after using. That is not love.

This became just a silly convolution of a story once Frederick got in. It's just unnerving to have him there. Keep it in the family.

Awesome fucking story!!! Loved the classroom scene along with the dp after the "prom".

EXCELLENT!!!

Freaking sexy!!

I am not sure how she will do her daughter. But I think her daughter should be even more of a sub than mommy.

hate when 1 claims to love the other then lets everyone else fuck em like some random bar pickup

use the lady in the shoe store to help with crystal's seduction

blackmail works really nice

or it can be a girls night that turns into confession night and then it can flow from there or roll into blackmail.

Awesome, fred no bed, but awesome. Keep at stallion

I know some comments have asked to remove Fredrick from future stories, but I find that limiting considering some of the ideas I've seen from other posters in regards to what the twos boys could get up to. The comment by Panicbynumbers sticks out! Thank you for writing and sharing!

Hi all...

Part three is almost finished first draft and should be out in August or September...

The story will be a lengthy seduction of Crystal by the mom with help from Michael...watch for it...

Fredrick is a turn off :/

The slutty mom however 8======D~~~

I really loved this story. But take Frederick out.

I can't wait to read about crystal

I'd love to see a little inception done on crystal, slowly introducing her to the idea of incest as the story progresses. Planting the seeds that will grow into her submission. Or more plainly said, brain wash her.

I like this series and really enjoy the way Betty goes from 0 to nymph in a heartbeat. I'd love to see a scene where Betty and Crystal blowing Frederick and Michael while they play video games. Maybe some kind of slutty team challenge?

You should have the mom and sister give Michael a stocking foot job or a footsie/ footjob under the table. Frederick could also receive a footjob from the mom

I have read just about all of your stories and to be truthful I haven't found a loser in any of them. I read them for hours.

you are so talented! got me soo hard!

I think crystal should also be a 'closet' dome....mommy finds some domme gear and clothing in her luggage and uses the computer trick to show her she is interested.....femdom stories and pics left on her computer for her to see. Domming mommy will eventually lead into sex between crystal and Michael.

Thanks for the wonderful stories

Love the story, you are a very talented writer and I love your other stories.

Hmm some ideas for the continuing story - crystal is a submissive like her mother and she comes home in tears because her current partner caught her disobeying him with another women so broke up with her, she tells her Mum her problems and one thing leads to another and her brother catches them at it and joins in. Hopefully that helps ?

Get on with the submission of Crystal.

Mother Betty is one of the most elegant, business-like, sweet-mother type slutty whores I've read about in many years. And she's like aged wine, she only gets better.

My idea for Betty's Daughter/Michael's Sister Crystal coming home in about a week, is to initiate her by her brother Michael with sister and brother incestual sexual copulings, have mother Betty catch them and they spend the remainder of Crystal's time at hime fucking, sucking and licking each other's brains out. Since Michael will be their Master, they are not allowed to wear bra's nor panties at any time home or away, they go out to dinners flashing under short skirts and unbuttoned blouses, one of them gives Michael a blowjob and the other one fucks him for dessert, the go to some mall and do some serious flashing, Michael has them suck at least ten dicks and swallow each at some glory-hole joint, and at least one of them or maybe even both MOther and Daughter must get pregnant due to their Master's orders.

I love your story and I am looking forward to the next story with the seduction of the sister.

Beautiful piece of writing. You kept my cock up throughout the read. I would so much love to fuck you in the pussy, Jasmine. You are responsible for my rock-stiff hardon. I want to unload into your sweet pussy right in front of your husband. Can you write a story of me taking you before your husband's very eyes? I am a pussy-man...no ass...just plain, wet, sweet ol' pussy...your pussy. Go on now, take off your panties and write while I fuck you hard in the pussy! There, the tables are turned. You fucked us with your stories and now I just fucked you with your pen.

Thanks a million for the story. Jeez, i wanked several tyms as i thought of Betty's ass n pussy taking such a beating throughout. Wht i think is you are probably narrating ur personal xperiences here n tht's just the way i wud luv to think of u, Jas. I wanted to think of my mom lyk this but it is u i cud only think abt. I wnt u in the exact same way. Um in luv with u.

Horny stud @ 22yrs of age.

Her son and mommy-slut, plus his friend Frederick is the sexual trifecta! I'm waiting for Crystal the bitchy sister to become a slave to her brother like mommy-slut! Finish the story already!!

Perhaps the daughter could have just broken up with her bf and is horny cuz she can't be satsfied by him anymore?

Love your writing Jasmine its so hot

Alicia xx :*

Can't wait for them to fuck the livIng daylights out of the

Daughter .Please make her as Deprived as her Mum.

I want to wank hard over this or rip my girlfriends knickers

Off and fuck her whilst reading aloud.

I love reading your imaginative erotic stories from the perspective of the female. Wonderful insight into what she's feeling. Loved it.!!

I think it would be interesting for Betty to come up with a long complicated seduction plan for Crystal. Have Michael have her to tell it to her. Then have Mommy find that Crystals' diary has fallen out of her bag into her trunk, after having to go show a house after just getting her home. Upon reading some of it, she discovers that not only has Crystal decided that she is bisexual, but is desperate to find a dominate person as the only one she has found to appease her submissive nature graduated at the end of Fall term and moved away. Betty then calls Michael on cell and tells him to go spend the night at Freddy's house, but to return home early and quietly to take his place as both their master. Then that sets-up a whole situation where brother can join sister at college on a full scholarship. Just a thought, but I do enjoy your stories.

This is just a suggestion since i noticed u havent submitted yet but since the son wants his sister cant u just have mom like drug her and tie her up and let micheal have her? As like a secret fetish of crystals that she tells mom in a drunken episode? Blah blah thats why she treats him like shit cuz shes disgusted with her self???? Idk its a thought if nothing else.

Go for the sister. I think it would be hot as hell. Not sure how to do it, but it would be hot as hell and I would bust my nut on more than once.

oh my god please finish this story, i would cum so hard hearing about how hard they pounded the sister

What a great story I pulled myself and shot my load early in the story.

Do not waste to much time in writing and telling us about Michael and Frederick fucking both Chystal and mother in the same room and then possibly changing partners. Let us know when all four are cumming together and cum is dripping out of the womens cunts and the mens cocks.

Thanks,

Len

when are you going to finish the story about the sister. She promised her son his sister so shouldn't it be her top priority for him?

love this story its so hot. please hurry and write the new part about crystal

As always your story was great. The only thing I didn't like is Betty behaving like a submissive with Frederick. She is Michael's slave not his. He can lend her to him if he wants but he would be with HIS permission not whenever Frederick wants. It would be different if Frederick's mother were to be their slave too. Two masters and two slaves would make more sense than two master for one slave.

It could be the key to seduce the sister. She feels something is fishy about the two boys and accidentally learns they plan of seducing Fred's mom. Instead of being disgusted she is curious and wants to help.

Or Betty confess she is hot for Fred's mom and ask advise to her daughter. She tells her daughter she wants to dominate the other mom and while they seduce her she also seduce her daughter.