All Comments on 'Peter and His Neighbours Ch. 03'

by Jack1107

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
GET AN EDITOR

You really need to get an editor as your stories just don't flow and are really abrupt, which means I just don't get any enjoyment reading them

FreedomBaseFreedomBaseover 5 years ago
The Laws of Probability

After completing my third installment, I can see there's a severe lack of "believe-ability" to this tale. Two women in agreement to sharing one man is believable. The more women you add the less likely the scenario. Perhaps I'm also missing a lot of background on why Mags and Kay would agree to having a child with Peter. . . . and so quickly ! ! They hardly know each other.

As for the story line: I love the fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

With all the fisting I believe it belongs in fetish.

Truly massive cock if she can feel him after being fisted.

Agree with other comment. Don't really know him But want him as father for children.

Maybe fantasy category.

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