All Comments on 'Pets'

I was very interested in this story, but there has been no Part 2, etc. Aren't you going to add on for those who found the idea intersting?

I'm confused. People reject your story? I don't understand why. I thought it was okay and would like to read more. The grammar and such was fine, and the content was fine as well. I have seen much worse, so I don't understand why you feel rejected.

Anyway, I liked it. Just wanted to tell you that.

I thought it was great! I'd like to see another chapter come out soon!

I'll say honestly that the subject of your story (being forced into such a life) isn't really my thing, but as far as everything else it is a decent piece of writing and I agree that it would be worth continuing.

Not a bad start for the story it can get better with more people and her being made to do more things.

You make the act of orgasm too....bland. You have the opposite problem most of the stories do, too little setup, character, and not enough erotic details and description. Basically more world building and foreplay. Also why is the main charcter so chill with her predicament? Like is that a facet of the world she's in or is this like blackmarket underground shit set in a world like ours? But really draw out the erotic bits if you arent going to fix anything story wise, your descriptions lack passion. Also a tad vanilla for a slave girl story, really hone in on the inherit kinky situation you've set your characters in.

But all that said I do kinda see the feel you were going for and its okay. Not anything to flood my panties over at the moment but shows promise.

This story seems like the start of a series. The sex in it is not very explicit and it's over way to fast. As a stand-alone, there is very little plot--just a woman kidnapped and put into a pen to be sold as a pet. I would want to know what happens next. I assume she will be bought and taken home to live with her new owner. What will the owner want to do with her? Will the owner keep her with other pets or will she be the only one? What kind of training will the owner put her through? Will she be kept in a cage? Will she try to run away? Will the owner have her sleep in his/her bed or on the floor? What will the owner do with her to user her or humiliate her? Will the owner punish her? If so, how? Will the owner share her with his friends? Since this is a site with erotica, there should be lots of sex and it should have explicit details so that the women who read it can identify with her as they finger themselves and the male readers can imagine having her as a pet as they stroke themselves. If it works really well, couples can excite each other by reading it aloud.