All Comments on 'Phone Games'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very original and erotic

Loved this story. Very original and a massive turn on. Completely different format from your last story which was also brilliantly written. Keep up the good work, more please !!!

LadyLeeLadyLeeabout 15 years ago
Hot Hot Hot

This story was HOT. It had me squirming and dripping wet wanting to be the woman in it. I loved the fact that he wasn't really there to make her do anything, that she did it all to make him happy.

Please write more...I beg you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
very hot

I loved all the things he made you do, but the psychological tease. That's the best.

Keep it up!

Mister

exiledmasterexiledmasterover 14 years ago
Just so good

Accuracy, fun, sexiness and a smooth flowing narrative...

Anyone would think you do this sort of stuff all the time?

What, you mean you do? I'll just get my phone...

Damn, no signal...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow that was good

Very good - what a mind fuck

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 14 years ago
A most well-written tale.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

All the better for being true. Going to buy carrots tomorrow..

Asia69Asia69almost 13 years ago
wow!

That was absolutely incredible!! I loved it! God i love that part of domination...the head games raping your mind! would love for you to write another one! Great great job you should be proud! xo

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