All Comments on 'Photo Shoot'

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It is easy to do anything in front of the camera. It frees you and lets you so wild!

Just reading this is so how I want to experience my first time with a woman. All inhabitians are thrown away as she and I explore the sexual desires of one another.

Nice but forgettable. "A" for effort though. Thank you Stonedancer

Why did you cut it off? You had a great start. Only suggestion I have for improvement is spend some of your time writing descriptors on your two characters...breasts, nipples, genitals, pubic hair or lack thereof, race, hair color, etc. otherwise, good job - 4 stars from me.

This definitely needs at least one more chapter, if not more! ;->