by blkngry
loved it, the bitch sister may eventually get to like him maybe and even mom might like some 'enhancements" and she might get to like his big dick too.
I wasn't expecting too much from this but it was pretty damn good! Strong characterization, good dialogue, a fun twist to an old (but good) premise. I haven't read a Master PC-style story in a while. This is a very strong start to what looks like a longer, very entertaining story. I'm wondering how things will develop. Nice work!
This could be a great series. The sister, her mom, the former playboy model...
It was a great story to read and im anxiously waiting for more
Loved your "Alan's Thoughts" story and was sad to see that you haven't added to it in a while. Thank god I checked for other stories by you because this one is great! Thanks for bringing back the MasterPCesque feel to this. What a great story. Please continue!
I have been looking for something like this for so long.
Amazing, please continue, for another 10 chapters.
This is certainly a spin off of Master PC but it's so cool. Well done, hope you have a outlet for a public market, you need to be paid for your work.
I'm sure the following chapters are as good as this one, keep up the great work.
A fiver just for the novelty of the concept not to mention great story line.
Thanks a bunch for the imagination and great talent.
God I hate that bitch! I hope you tame her in the next chapter.
Great read! Loved it! Great original fantasy and I can't wait to
Read more. Five stars and a favourite story and author. You have
A talent. Thank you.