by blkngry
God I hate that bitch! I hope you tame her in the next chapter.
Great read! Loved it! Great original fantasy and I can't wait to
Read more. Five stars and a favourite story and author. You have
A talent. Thank you.
This is certainly a spin off of Master PC but it's so cool. Well done, hope you have a outlet for a public market, you need to be paid for your work.
I'm sure the following chapters are as good as this one, keep up the great work.
A fiver just for the novelty of the concept not to mention great story line.
Thanks a bunch for the imagination and great talent.
I have been looking for something like this for so long.
Amazing, please continue, for another 10 chapters.
Loved your "Alan's Thoughts" story and was sad to see that you haven't added to it in a while. Thank god I checked for other stories by you because this one is great! Thanks for bringing back the MasterPCesque feel to this. What a great story. Please continue!
It was a great story to read and im anxiously waiting for more
This could be a great series. The sister, her mom, the former playboy model...
I wasn't expecting too much from this but it was pretty damn good! Strong characterization, good dialogue, a fun twist to an old (but good) premise. I haven't read a Master PC-style story in a while. This is a very strong start to what looks like a longer, very entertaining story. I'm wondering how things will develop. Nice work!
loved it, the bitch sister may eventually get to like him maybe and even mom might like some 'enhancements" and she might get to like his big dick too.