All Comments on 'Pink Ch. 04'

I feel a bit sick, like when you go past a terrible accident and can't help being entranced by the carnage. It's very well written as it does stir up feelings of outrage but am waiting to see how this plays out before I howl at the laptop. I couldn't play this game,for all my submissiveness I would become viscous in my humiliation and stab the pair of them. Well done!

I imagine all who read here find things which are not their cup tea. Had you identified the nature of the story, you might not have as many flaming reviews. Human nature being what it is once we are involved, like it or not, we tend to continue. We want to see what will happen even if we don't like it. So your warning/whinge is too little too late. We will watch the emotional bloodletting and be horrified.

2 * for you.

"Human nature being what it is once we are involved, like it or not, we tend to continue. We want to see what will happen even if we don't like it."

What a massive compliment to the author. You don't like the elements of the story, and yet, you cannot tear yourself away from it.

Emotional masochism?? Sweetheart the term you're not using, which is really what your story is about is 'emotional abuse'. I think you're continuing for the shock value. Disgusting.

It's fantasy. It's hot. Please finish it! I can't go another month refreshing your author page. (And as a reader, I am not sure who I identify with more, whore, or Pink... delightfully fun to read.)

Everyone is allowed an opinion on things, just as you. Except in the constitution amendment 1 states freedom of speech as well as freedom of press. Now this author was using her freedom of press to write a story some people enjoy, notice I didn't say all. Because most don't find this sexy or erotic, but others do. I am not here to argue your constitutional rights, but I am here to argue hers. She has the right to write whatever she pleases, now just because it doesn't please you doesn't mean you can get on and give her flak for it. Now as I said before you are entitled to your opinion, but that does not mean you can harrass the author! Harassment and constructive criticism are two very different things. Now if she can't handle constructive criticism then that is her fault, but if you think saying that she has done all kinds of things wrong with her story is ok, then your wrong and you need a reality check. I just want to say to the person who stated she put the disclaimer on to late, shows that you have no right to judge. She is allowed to put a disclaimer when she feels it's necessary, she felt now was necessary. If you got on to state how 'Messed Up' her story was I have one message for you:

STOP. READING. IT.

IF YOU CANT GET BEAR TO READ THE STORY THEN DONT, BECAUSE YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SAY SOMETHING TO HER ABOUT IT! Leave the author alone about her work. And for the religious people out there I have two things for you, first:

1: YOUR READING PORN/LITEROTICA

Second:

2: ITS NOT YOUR PLACE TO JUDGE ITS GODS SO GET OFF HERE AND GO TO CHURCH.

Sorry to offend anyone that is religious but it's the truth.

He's a bad daddy. I know you mentioned that it will get worse but i want to know before contining to read it if it will have a happy ending for babygirl where pink is dismissed forever and she gets back with her daddy or finds a better daddy? It just seems so terrible to treat her like a slave 24/7. Babygirl should deserve a happy ending for all the torture she's gone through. I hope pink and daddy gets something tragic happen to them, like the death of pink at the hands of babygirl. You wrote a wonderful story that really got me on the side of babygirl whose the narrator, and emotional charged.

Just gets worse and worse treatment. He can't care for her at all or he wouldn't be subjecting her to this emotional abuse. She should leave and find a Daddy worthy of her submission. This one is obviously not. It wouldn't be emotional abuse if she were into it however you make a point at least once a chapter of showing she doesn't enjoyed it in any sense. Maybe if they were different type of subs she would.

Wonderful story. Anyone who criticizes you or any of your characters simply doesn't get it. It's just a story, a fantasy. Hell, there isn't even anything non-consensual in it. In this most recent chapter you clearly state that our heroine has a safe word. And chooses not to use it.

Please keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

You leave me hanging all the time . I love this story a lot , but you make wait for a long time .So please come out with part 5 soon

I've been looking for a story like this for AGES. A perfect play on emotion, more than the physical aspect. I like how it is told from the original babygirl's perspective, especially the shift from being babygirl to pretty much a slave. I hope there is a continuation. I'd love to see Pink and Daddy making it official. The emotional torment would make for such an intense story. Kudos to you!

Not BDSM.