All Comments on 'Pissing Pony Passions'

Read this story open-mouthed with my chin on the desk.

Fast paced, deliciously worded. Don't know what else to say...words won't come. I did but the words won't. You fried my brain in endorphins.

I'm not all that fond of pony girl stories, but that didn't seem to matter. You've put this reader so far into the character's head that it didn't matter if I shared her kink or not.

As in your other story here (and WHY are there only 2? please write more!), the character's thoughts and emotions feel very true, the pacing is perfect, and the story starts and stops at exactly the right places, with no slow spots or extraneous material, and with nothing left out.

deliciously nasty