by betweenthesheets
Great story, just a tad too long leading up to the grand finale, but I enjoyed it none the less!
So neither the nerd with an MBA or his tease of a boss has heard of the morning-after pill? (ps. The punctuation was highly distracting: question marks follow the question, not the end of the sentence including the quote.)
It kind of only finally got interesting at the end. The rest was just boring
Storyline was let down by far too much repetition and punctuation errors.
Loved the main protagonist, what a bastard* for recognising that she was attracted to him.
"Wait... He didn't even kiss* her?!" I uttered, astonished.
Those teasing words, from her teasing lips, were evidently
lost on him.
*(italics)
This is a good setup, lots of ways to go with a sequel!
Good buildup.
But when the sex happens, there's too much missing. Some cunnilingus, sure, but nothing about/with her breasts. And she never gets her hand/s on his cock. A slow jerking for a while, all the while refusing to let him fuck her -- until she just HAD to have his cock in her would have been nice.
Gave it four stars.