All Comments on 'Plausible Deniability'

Good buildup.

But when the sex happens, there's too much missing. Some cunnilingus, sure, but nothing about/with her breasts. And she never gets her hand/s on his cock. A slow jerking for a while, all the while refusing to let him fuck her -- until she just HAD to have his cock in her would have been nice.

Gave it four stars.

This is a good setup, lots of ways to go with a sequel!

so will we get a chance to read what happens next?

Storyline was let down by far too much repetition and punctuation errors.

Loved the main protagonist, what a bastard* for recognising that she was attracted to him.

"Wait... He didn't even kiss* her?!" I uttered, astonished.

Those teasing words, from her teasing lips, were evidently

lost on him.

*(italics)

It kind of only finally got interesting at the end. The rest was just boring

So neither the nerd with an MBA or his tease of a boss has heard of the morning-after pill? (ps. The punctuation was highly distracting: question marks follow the question, not the end of the sentence including the quote.)

Great story, just a tad too long leading up to the grand finale, but I enjoyed it none the less!

This was good. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.