All Comments on 'Play Time in the Parking Lot'

brilliant story love it. play in the parking lot was right. reading this was l.like watching as this started to take place,. it only got better the more i read of it just as i was getting to the very excing part it stopped. but im sure you could if you wish write a second part or more. frantastic story awsome writing.

Extremely well written and such a turn on. Great to see good structure and a slow build up.

The ending surprised me. I thought they were going to be caught.