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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Her conservatory comparison would have cooked her goose. NO one could ever get by that. It would become a growing cancer.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I’d ditch that whore just like that. Once a cheater, always a cheater. Who would ever trust someone like that ever again? It would always be hanging over everything. She comes home late or goes out with a girlfriend and the trust that was implicit never returns. She blew up the marriage. There is no going back.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

If it was just a case of the husband minding out she cheated while he was away, they may have stayed together with a lot of work.

But after listening to them, hearing his wife say how much better the bloke was and hearing them swap lovers I think most blokes would have kicked her to the kerb.

I know these stories are fiction but that is stretching reality a bit to far

Sandman87Sandman876 months ago

He heard his wife say that he didn't compare to her lover. How can he have sex with her knowing that he can't even make her cum. He will always compare himself to her lover and he will always come up short. Man, if he wants any sex life, he is going to need to dump her and get someone else.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I'd like to ask if the commenters who are sticking with her if they would be so forgiving if they were in his shoes.. (yes i know its a fictional story)

RR431RR4317 months ago

What the wife did is a marital death sentence. That’s it. Move on.

Norseman123Norseman123over 1 year ago

Story was OK but she got off too lightly

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The pussy cuckold wasn’t man enough to walk away from the skanky cheating slut. Are all the men in your world women in disguise? One star for another shitty cuckold story.

NoSauce4uNoSauce4uover 1 year ago

She didn't make a mistake, but had sex with them the entire night, swapped partners, and even had threesomes. This isn't a mistake, but fully-fledged cheating on a high level. A mistake would have been some sex and then feeling guilty and going home, etc. Idk, but she stayed there and whatnot. Not only that but she tried to lie and evade the situation even when it became a bit obvious that the husband knows the truth.

Idk, I would have divorced her.

BH54BH54almost 2 years ago

I read the other comments and I disagree with them. You don't automatically throw out a 25-year marriage after 1 mistake. They worked through it and the husband certainly had some faults which they acknowledged. Good story. It was real and I liked it.

mattenwmattenwabout 2 years ago

"brain_damage" Your pen name is a speech in itself. What more needs to be said?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The story was readable but your ending is only partially correct. Correct part is Stan telling Bill. I do not think I need to point out the obvious incorrect part..but I will as you do not seem to know. Only someone desperate, brain damaged or has no pride or integrity would not have tossed her to the curb even before she could sit down when she entered the house. But then again,maybe he also cheated and sucked it up.. NOT.. unless you,the author kept that part out of the story. A hint brain_damage, for future stories,remember this bit of REAL life truth. Being stabbed in the back by someone trusted,is unforgivable. Such a breach of trust as infidelity is inexcusable. To the point that it should involve minor hospitalization. Being civilised it does not happen enough to act as a deterrent. Another hint for future stories..alcohol,drugs do not excuse infidelity. To be drunk,drugged or blackmailed, a person put themselves into that position in the first place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No. Wifey in this one deserves the divorce; let her fuck younger guys with big cocks (of whom there are a very small number). She will never have a long term relationship with one of the guys with big cocks' why buy the cow if the milk is for free? She will fuck around again, it's a virtual certainty.

pummel187pummel187over 2 years ago

Guess what?

I lowered my cholesterol today by eating a bowl of CHEERIOS

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You think a 'one off' excuse is acceptable?? Your vows were clearly different to everybody else's!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a fucking wimp to take the slut back!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I see the scum BTB trolls really liked the story Lol. Yes she cheated. It was a one off. Forgiving her would have made her a more attentive wife than she was before. It takes real strength to forgive.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

At least Bill is a MAN!!! Stan is just a worthless pussy CUCK!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I Hate Cluck Stories like this one ,, I am glad that Stan told Bill

JonDoe315JonDoe315almost 3 years ago

sorry but she does not deserve a 2nd chance.

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Divorce was his only true option. She did it once without considering him and if push came to shove she would be selfish again and do it again.

She cannot be trusted she knowingly cuckolded him she is a bitch.

Divorce her, you bet and she has the shame in front of her daughter, family and friends.

Scores 2/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Ignore the pathetic troll comments. This story poses an interesting question. Stan has been married for 25 years and is at the tail end of his life does he really want to divorce Helen and start again. If he was extremely rich then it's probably possible but for an ordinary working guy would you want to start all over again and face a life of being alone.

Helen cheated on him and kinda justified it with the lack of exciting sex in their marriage. But as Stan said to her she should have talked to him about it rather than cheating on him.

On balance I think Stan was right not to throw her away and accept that she made a mistake rather than face a life alone at the end of his years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

If you are looking at comments before you read this story. The author hasn't published on this website for over 10 years.

The pointless comments below are just that ....pointless

The story itself isn't that good.

silentsoundsilentsoundover 3 years ago

You're one gay motherfucker....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The only reason you are still together

Is, you have a brain damaged partner

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What a Cluck

If Your Wife Cheats on You Get a Divorce .. Ask My ex .. I kicked her to the Curb as soon as I knew ...

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 4 years ago
this guy is a glutton for punishment

her heard them and still stayed. Next time he'll film it to wack off too.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago

Reading again with same reaction. She would be on the streets with Helen.

QuintiusQuintiusover 4 years ago
Ran out of gas

I don't mind reconciliation stories if they're done well. This one wasn't. It felt as though b_d came up with a scenario, knew how it should end, but then didn't bother to put the work in to make it satisfying or believable. If an author is going to try to sell a reconciliation story there at least has to be some reasoning behind it. A short conversation about how the husband realizes he'd been neglecting her emotional needs and has been seeing a counselor and that the wife had no right or excuse to fuck around, then a statement that neither one wants a divorce is not a satisfactory resolution. There was no meat to this ending. No descriptions of what happened, no mention of how Betty atoned for what she did, no summation of how Stan got over his mistrust, no explanation of how she helped rebuild his confidence in his lovemaking ability...

"I don't want to get a divorce."

"Me neither. Move back into the bedroom."

This is not a good ending. Not sure if b_d got bored or what but this is a poor effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pathetic!!

Just another Pitiful RAAC story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I love a happy ending

Top marks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hmmmmm

Baseball bat or .45?)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Stan's Not The Man!

Cuck-a-doodle,DON'T,you dumb fuck! Wifey didn't just cheat,she sneakily set it up and then sucked and fucked TWO guys bareback! Divorce the bitch! Case closed!

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
Love BTB stories and some reconciliation but not when talking about how much better he is than husband

Agree another wimpy Cucky story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Another

Another wimp husband story.Are there any real men out there?.

silentsoundsilentsoundover 5 years ago
WOW!

Pretty seriously shitty story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Tom should divorce her

Once a cheater always a cheater. Her friend is now single so it is only a matter of time when they go trolling for guys to screw.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
No way

No way you take her back after that. She didn't talk to him, she just went out and went crazy. Tom did the right thing Stan is wearing the horns.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 6 years ago
@Anonymous Re: "Crap!"

You people always forget that there are TWO parts to the Literotica name:

LITERature and erotica. Just because a particular story or stories don't contain enough erotica to suit your personal taste doesn't make it wrong! There are plenty of sites out there featuring pure erotica if that is what you're looking for.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
only solution

Stan must find playmate of his own. If need be hire two hot young escorts and record the sex. Make his wife listen to recording.

Scales having been balanced, they can then move on.

I wonder how many times in months leading up to betrayal she came on to husband or told him how attractive he was. Females never understand the street goes both ways!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The ol' empty nest rationalization!

The author wrote the wife had full time job. She volunteered at daughter's school, but did not want to volunteer during evening free time, take up a hobby, or take some evening adult education classes.

She decides to ''cure'' her non-existent empty nest blues by hitting bars with ''the girls''

Empty nest syndrome applies to full-time stay at home moms whose children are grown, not a wife who has a full time job.

Hey her husband golfed...she could have asked him to teach her.

She repeatedly and adamantly stated she could never cheat on husband. Tough to believe she would cave so easily on first time playing variation of flirting game

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
ugh

You write some incomplete, wimpy cuck shit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Only One True Outcome Here, DIVORCE

Stan should of divorced her, as the saying goes, "Once a cheater, always a cheater."

JeepLover42JeepLover42about 7 years ago
Horrible

Just, horrible cuck crap.

The woman Details how she had sex with two men in every way possible and husband just accepts it.

Oh yeah, and I makes their marriage better. Right

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Stan just doesn't compare

If you're going to have your cheating wife character toss out a barb like that you need to actually work for the reconciliation. You didn't even try in this story so the reconciliation is hollow at best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wimp

The least the stupid cuck could do is go out and find a hottie and bring her home and fuck her in front of his wife (all night long). I can't rate this lower than one star because there is no such option.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Another man wimping out

She knew what she was doing and there is no way he will ever trust her again. Divorce her and get on with his life and he will get his self-respect back.

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2almost 8 years ago
5

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
1*

brain_damage is an apt name.

shvg65shvg65almost 8 years ago
It's over

I know with me being 50 years old, I would need a strong Viagra to get hard after hearing what she said about him being the best she ever had. If we ever had sex again I would think she was thinking about how great the other guy was. There are a lot of single women 50 to 65 out there looking for romance. They may have had better, but he didn't hear it first hand. DIVORCE her ass and move on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
You need to learn about punctuation!

A new paragraph is started every time a new person speaks. You NEVER have two people speaking in the same paragraph. When one person is speaking and you have multiple paragraphs you leave the quotation marks off the end of the last sentence but start the next paragraph with the marks.

Those rules are there for a reason. It makes a story much easier to read. It gets confusing when you don't know who is talking to who.

PeteCedarPeteCedarover 8 years ago
So stupid

He has to dump her as fast as he can. And as far as the other husband, would he want to know if her husband had caught the women instead of him? This entire situation is fucked up.

Dunny69Dunny69over 8 years ago
Unbelievable

If any man had heard what she had said then he would never touch, talk or accept her presence regardless how he may have previously felt.

sinsational83sinsational83almost 9 years ago
It will happen

As she said good ole Tom was much bigger and better than the husband was, and, he heard here say that so that will always be on his mind. And as for her, she will be out looking again for another big cock to fill her worthless pussy. So only time will tell and it's my opinion that they will NOT last. Aside from that, the story was very well written and well put together good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
He made a mistake

He should have dumped her cheating ass. No matter how much she says that she is sorry, as long as he forgives her, she'll be back looking for more. Will she ever be happy with him again? No.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
These anonymous are something else BTB alive .

Well after 25 years of. Marriage and one mistake I see how you can forgive her. Those who want to burn the bitch just a small. Minded people , who never had a good partner in life. Some marriages can't be saved and so be it.

ohyessssssohyessssssover 9 years ago
another fool

The bitch must go.....anyone could do much better. Remember, you excrete shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Reconcilation is fine, but take charge.

The husband is a wimp, not because he forgave her and took her back. It’s because he accepted her blaming him that he has stopped showing his appreciation of her. If he takes her back, he now knows he has to start telling her how sexy she is and to work hard in the bed room to keep he satisfied. Of course he’s doomed to fail because he can’t possibly keep up with her increasing hormone level while his is decreasing.

I’m not a fan of reconciliation stories, but if I am the husband I would tell the wife that she didn’t work to get appreciation. Did she try to dress up for him, to seduce him? Did she do anything besides lying like a log while making him do all of the work? Contrary to popular belief, the most of the male sexual organ isn’t the penis. Most of it is his eyes and his brain. It is the female’s job to arouse the male so he can penetrate her. Men are stimulated visually. This is why the porn industry is big business and why there are voyeur stories. So if I’m the husband listening to the wife whining about lacking sexual appreciation, I would tell her to shut the fuck up, strip down, wear heavier make ups, put on heels, and start pole dancing in the living room.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Damn

Should have just left the cheating cunt. Fucking cuck.

hawkeye0007hawkeye0007over 10 years ago
Crap!

Cuck bullshit...

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Last anon was right -

TO STAY ANON -

Feel sorry for the cheating, selfish, self absorbed bitch? Who knew her husband loved her but was bored so she decided it just fine to fuck around like her slut friend - both knew it was wrong, both knew it would destroy their (supposedly important) marriages.

But both decided not to try any other significant steps - like and open conversation of frank concerns? That was too hard so got the fuck around route? Stan was right if you actually love him tell him in clear terms and see what the response is - then walk if necessary. But betray a life time of trust for bid dick or two?? Fuck her - he was not a perfect person (or partner) bur was she?? NNOOOO!

She ws beyond lucky he even tried to work through it and keep her - he had to sit through her fucking and then look at her crusty skank self? Then try to look past it and find the love of his life in the middle of the cesspit she became - and loved every minute of it? She needed her friend to reminder her that she loved her husband not the big dick? right poor her -

Nicely written and a good plot -

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow - Feel sorry for the wife to be married to such a jerk

I enjoyed page 1 of the story, but then the author shows how much he does not love his wife. I realize maybe this is a fantasy, but the author apparently has a real dislike for woman and is not understanding at all. Normally I sign my comments, but you are not worthy of that

monkcalmmonkcalmalmost 11 years ago
not believable

It gets a 1 to feminist,so she can have her cake and eat it then all is forgiven this writers males have no anger or emotions all to womanly just to accepting like women wrote them up to make up for her husband throwing her cheating ass out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Three roads all lead to the same end.

1. Cuckold/wimp will limping and crying in the middle of the night losing wife's respect -then divorce!

2. The "size queen" will yearn for that big cock like Tom's and cheat again - divorce!

3. Stan wakes up to his unfeeling, self-absorbed cheater of a wife - divorce!!!!

Kick her cheating ass to the curb and find a true woman.

cantbuymycantbuymyover 11 years ago

out with the garbage cunt!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
she is a slut

an he is a wimp 1*

semofuncpl3semofuncpl3over 11 years ago
She is still

a slut. Put her out on the curb and her belonging in the yard with the sprinkler on that first night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wimp

no way i would touch her again what a wimp you made the guy. i dont care if they were married 60 yrs she is still a whore.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Any man that takes back a cheater isnt a real man he has no pride

dump her ass and divorce her its not worth it no matter what to stay with a cheater.

karan9876karan9876about 12 years ago
thy name is wimp

thy name is wimp. That says it all. What a loser.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
aitch'em says:

You really have the right "nom-de-plume" - you are brain damaged.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Huedogg is absolutely correct.

Sorry excuse for an author as well as a sorry excuse for a sordid tale.

huedogghuedoggalmost 13 years ago
i agree you have brain damage

writers here love to be the wimpy cuckold.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Shitty tale by asshole author.

Have you checked for having an STD? Obviously you are a sicko and likely into this crap. Funny if your spouse gave it to you. Couldn't happen to a more deserving piece of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Broken trust

She willingly and knowingly engaged in adultery, first with one and then in a menage a troi? If she had not been caught she most likely would have continued on the same path as her friend Helen and become a serial adulterer. After all she got away with it. It was only hubby finding out which put a cork in it.

As the husband said, she should have talked to him about the problems in their sex live before she engaged in extra marital activities. She didn't even give him the chance to adress their problem.

The husband however came to the wrong conclusion and should have divorced her. Trust, that priceless comodity, will never be truly healed once broken.

geopri71geopri71about 13 years ago
forgiveness

Why is a husband a whimp for not throwing her out .She got caught and after soul searching and time ,he took her back. I doubt if he totally forgave her ,but took into account there 25 good years together

ginrunnerxginrunnerxover 13 years ago
What a Wimp

I have to agree, a total waste of time

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Tom is da man

Tom is the only person in the whole story that does the right thing. Stan should go down to the nearest Wal - Mart and get the biggest pair of panties they have and start wearing them he is that much of a wimp

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
STAN BUTT UGLY OR JUST SOO DESPERATE?

"Tom is so much bigger than Stan. I've never felt that full and that used. I hate to admit it, but poor Stan just can't even compare." How could any guy get over hearing what went on there, especially hearing this quote that his wife said about him?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What a pile of dog shit!

Pathetic at best!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
well written but...

not believable unless the guy was an imbecile that looked like the elephant man

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WHAT!

The husband took her back...WTF. Sorry I read this story. Waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
So the husband has such low self-esteem that he keeps the slut wife? Who really crafted this pile of dung? Was it that idiot size 14 or his fag sidekick mancelt?

She cheats on him, talks shit about him and he still decides to keep her? Christ, he is as brain-dead as she is - they deserve each other. Author - you created this male character with all the genetic faults that JPB, Britease and MattM are famous for. Now all we need is the for the fag "size 14 & this mancelt boytoy" to defend this conniving bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Communications

This was a well thought out and well written story. The wife in this case learned the hard way that she needs to communicate or otherwise she will deeply hurt someone and caused a tremendous amount of stress on all involved. Ending worked out well but not all end this way. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
This has got to be one of the most pathetic efforts ever posted here!

Hopefully this idiot author is long gone and the "brain damage" was painfully slow. Geez, this stinks like that shit that www and bonnietaylor puke out. Piss poor and complete waste of space!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Agenda

Well written, erotic, euphoric, sexy, thrilling, tantalizing and absorbing...But, she is an intelligent woman and when she agreed to go out, while she was getting ready, while they drove to the club, whilke they danced, while they flirted and drank, while they cuddled...she KNEW damn well!!! Subleminally, she held her thoughts of adultery out of the edge of her conscious mind; however, all the right things happening she could end up having thrilling and exciting sex. She said it right, hubby would never measure up. She does love him, she does not want to leave him...BUT, she wants the thrill and excitement of casual and random thrilling sex. Unfortunately, her phone goof changed everything and now she needed to earn and keep hubby. He won't forget she lied, even given the obvious suggestion that he knew, she lied. Now, he will always wonder. Now, how does she have a night out, even an innocent one??? And, he wants to keep her and she now has that thrill in the back of her mind...it was exhiliarating...oh oh!!!

Maybe, just maybe, she loves him so much that she will Never play again?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
what worst ,old female fool or a young female fool

a old vain female fool,because she do anything to be young again.hubby should've put her ass on the street for a month.then she see how bless she really was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Should have dumped the bitch

Not my idea of a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
cockold in the morning

stan was a wimp and cockold.helen hubby bill wasn't a cockold.some men like stan wife are whores for other men.

Ducky7Ducky7almost 15 years ago
Stan is in for a very long and hard road.

"It was fantastic and so erotic. Tom is so much bigger than Stan. I've never felt that full and that used. I hate to admit it, but poor Stan just can't even compare." With these words Betty will always be comparing Stan to any cock she thinks about. He may be the only one she uses for the rest of there marrage but it is getting shorter everyday.

I liked the story and the development but I think Stan jumped back into the saddle too soon to really think about the real impact of what she did.

dreamcatcher101dreamcatcher101almost 15 years ago
only choice is a divorce

This story does not work for me..I agree with Vulcan's comment,and I wonder if her husband had not found out about the orgy and the comments She made to her slut Friend that night and watched Her come home "dripping of cum",that She would have told him about her "mistake" or if She would have continued the cheating?? there was no pattern established to say one way or an other.. Yes She was sorry and felt bad and remorseful but that could have been for getting caught and not for what She done ..She certainly was not thinking about her husband other then that He could not compare to what She was getting that night the best sex she's "ever" had from the guys "BIGGER COCK"..Well there is always someone with a bigger cock..Can He trust Her after this not to do it again?? "NO WAY:!! And it looked that only he went to a marriage councilor.. I bet it was a women..it does not say that She did see one..3 weeks was way to early to decide to stay together,it must be that he thought he was getting to old to leave all that he invested in their marriage and just wimped out..There are all kinds of reasons to stay together most times its financial reasons but sadly it does not work out in the majority of cases..And She got a get out of jail free card.. There were no consequences to Her cheating.. I would like to know where they are in 5yrs

dreamcatcher101dreamcatcher101almost 15 years ago
only choice is a divorce

This story does not work for me..I agree with Vulcan's comment,and I wonder if her husband had not found out about the orgy and the comments She made to her slut Friend that night and watched Her come home "dripping of cum",that She would have told him about her "mistake" or if She would have continued the cheating?? there was no pattern established to say one way or an other.. Yes She was sorry and felt bad and remorseful but that could have been for getting caught and not for what She done ..She certainly was not thinking about her husband other then that He could not compare to what She was getting that night the best sex she's "ever" had from the guys "BIGGER COCK"..Well there is always someone with a bigger cock..Can He trust Her after this not to do it again?? "NO WAY:!! And it looked that only he went to a marriage councilor.. I bet it was a women..it does not say that She did see one..3 weeks was way to early to decide to stay together,it must be that he thought he was getting to old to leave all that he invested in their marriage and just wimped out..There are all kinds of reasons to stay together most times its financial reasons but sadly it does not work out in the majority of cases..And She got a get out of jail free card.. There were no consequences to Her cheating.. I would like to know where they are in 5yrs

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent story

Well written and with the only conclusion that made sense. After all those years of happy marriage it would be hard for Stan to walk away from a totally remorseful wife.

She'll need to deal with the guilt until her dying day; no-one gets off scotfree.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Dry and emotionless!

This story had a pretty good plot, but the writing style and dialogue ruined it. There was absolutely no believable emotion on either the wife's or Stan's part after the discovery and confession of the adultery. The dialogue read like it came from the side of a cereal box. The husband's anger never came across, and the wife's protestations of love and sorrow read like a preface to a history book. No emotion or anger, or pain really came across.<p>

If he heard the fuck session from her cell phone (amazing that he just happened to record it), then he would have known that she considered that Ryan was not worth keeping, and that he was nowhere near as good as Tom was. Yet the son-of-a-bitch does not divorce her! That was about as believable as the dialogue was convincing.<p>

This story has to rank as one of the poorest written I have read on Lit.com. That is a shame because the plot, as I said before, had great potential, but the dialogue was stilted, long-winded, and unconvincing. The execution destroyed the plot.<p>

Have a good day!

zed0zed0about 15 years ago
!

Despicable, inexcusably lame wimp story. Stan need s to develop a taste for cream pie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
nice touches

wife played the game and lied. nice touch for the cell and the recording, and then using it when he did. it bothered ne that she failed to discuss, and did what she did, more than once. forgiveness with such a slut? husband's apparent word to bill abdout helen was a nice touch too. consequences. me, probably fini w her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good story

good story ,i think maybe 10percent of spouses would havs taken her back in the real world.Shelied and would have done it again if not caught.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good story

good story ,i think maybe 10percent of spouses would havs taken her back in the real world.Shelied and would have done it again if not caught.

Orion623Orion623over 15 years ago
Very Good

I enjoyed the story. While it was a simple tale of a one-time infidelity it made the point that for this couple love meant more than lust. Stan's talk with his wife about what their marriage meant to him was particularly effective. He laid out the positives and negatives as well as honestly acknowledging his lack of involvement in their marriage but placed the blame for her infidelity squarely on her shoulders where it belonged. His forthrightness and her acceptance of the blame cleared the air for them to rebuild their marriage. A very well told story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Apt

Writer's name very apt for his\her\it's writing skills

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