All Comments on 'Playing Up Ch. 01'

You should definitely continue this. It's amazing.

more please? purdy please? *gets down onto knees prettily*

a sad day when we have to announce the use of proper English :) Personal gripes aside - wonderful story. Hot enough to leave you wanting more :)

Very well done, and certainly hot. Looking forward to more!

Fantastic story. I wouldn't mind meeting Sian myself

Five.

Hot story - I'll be dreaming of her tonight!

Hiya,

Thank you for your marvellous comments.

Have just submitted a follow-up to this. Apologies for the delay in posting, it's been a horrible year in real life. I'm getting back into the writing now, I'm laid up so don't have much else to do! Oh well.

rz x

To cool myself down

Ben de la Roubert

Amazing! 5* Rating for you TJ.

Thanks

knocking one out as i read.

dai self raising indeed

TJ, you knocked the genre for six! Wonderful interplay and delightful mind games inserted in the eroticism. Bravo!

Your writing made it easy to read. I hope the next two chapters are just as good!

Very good! Certainly got my pulse racing.

I would add the conversion and another 2 points to my 5 stars if I could ;). What a hot start to a story! LOL.

You did a very good job of putting us in her point of view. Of course, I could see it from Rob's, as well. Excellent sex, well arrived at.

Let's hope none of the other players caused an accident driving home because their designated Driver was off shagging... haha

Good story though