All Comments on 'Playing with Ann'

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dmwriterdmwriterover 7 years ago
Forget Texting

I got the feeling I was reading an extra long text message. Way too many typos, abbreviations, misspellings, tense changes, etc. If you want to continue putting your fantasies or hot experiences into prose, you may want to use a fellow Literotica writer to act as an editor and advisor.

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