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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
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All of your stories seem so dark and depressing, even while often erotic. I think you should try to expand your writing by having some good things happen to the tortured victims. For example, let the husband and wife escape from Moscow, or have some police storm Sabrina's dungeon and free up Gracie and her brother, while still having some great sex with Cassie or others.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Hated

One of the Domme you hope to see get punished by someone line Conner

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excellent

Siblings need to have forced sex while aphrodisiaced and bound together. And maybe his sister will turn out to be pregnant later, after escape...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
The sequel

Definitely give a lot of details about how Connor does his sister and then think about adding their kidnapped mom and have Connor and his sis forcefully take care of her

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