All Comments on 'Pleasing Misstress'

...your presentation of this story, particularly the apparently random use of i and I throughout took the edge off its enjoyability.

Pay more attention to detail and proof-read more thoroughly before submitting your work and it will be better received; as it stands, many potential readers will be inclined to move on to something else.

3 *s - please keep writing, and thank you for your efforts.

traci

Sloppy presentation ruins an otherwise serviceable stroker. Proofreading is less fun than writing, but makes reading easier. And we all want readers to like our stuff, right?

And remembered that he hadn't liked the humiliation. He never called her again.

Now I scream and cry if mistress makes me keep jacking after I cum once. It hurts so much and is agonizing but mistress knows best. I think she likes seeing me roll in pain and cry as I pump my little thing.