All Comments on 'Pleasing the Teen Futa'

I hope there's many more chapters to come!

If it interests you could you write a story about a futanari wearing a skirt with no underwear

Loved it. Thank you.

This was so hot. Thank you.

Great story, but it did get confusing as Linda's daughter's name kept changing. First it was Sarah, but then when she was telling her mom about the plan it changed to Leah and finally when mom and daughter were getting facials it went back to Leah. Need to do a better job of proofreading.

You can't even keep your own charcters' names straight. Complete waste of time.

Don't pay attention to the trolls. They are wrong. I really like this story. It is among the best in this genre. Yes, there are mistakes, but the plot and characters more than make up for it. I would like to see a follow up to this story.

The names of your characters stayed the same. It is just the stupid trolls who can not read correctly.

I've only read a few stories online that can compete with this. Its one of the best, and what id be aiming for in my own writing. One suggestion; dont do a sequel. its a great story, buts its a standalone. Do something new for us

This is the dumbest story I read in a long time. First of all, if I wanted to read a story about a bunch round heel sluts cheating on their husbands. I would of went to the Loving wives section. Next thing if a 19 year old that so stupid to let someone fuck them just they want to keep them as a friend, then they deserve to get knocked up.

Would love you read more work by you with futas. Great story

I would like to read a story on Linda and Leah. Exploring their relationship and how it changes Linda's life.

The cherry on top of this story would be if Linda got pregnant with Leah's baby and Sarah got pregnant with Julie's baby.

At times, the dialogue seems a bit awkward, but the story got better. FYI, the term for "high sex drive" is nymphomania.

Thank you everyone who have read the story. Especially if you have voted or taken the time to write a comment. Even for those who did not enjoy the story, it is still cool that you take the time for that.

I am hoping that another chapter will be done soon. I have planned most of it out, just need to find the time and inspiration to get it all down on paper. Knowing that there are people who liked the story and look forward to more chapters or stories certainly help.

Thank you again

This is one of the hottest transexual stories on here, and the incest is the icing on the cake! I would love to see more of both!

I must say that I found this to be a really hot story, I certainly enjoyed it. You do have an issue with the names changing, but as somebody mentioned some careful proofreading would fix that.

I don't know that I would like a true sequel to this story, but I think an interesting story line would be to see what develops between Linda and Sarah. That could be a very interesting lesbian/incest story.

For me this was a little weird but in a good way. It's not the type of story I normally read, generally futanari, incest and pregnancy in an erotic context have no appeal. But I'm glad I stumbled on this one, I never realised how hot a girl with a dick could be.

Just a few minor quibbles; more proof reading is a must. The reasoning behind the whole thing: fucking your daughter's friend to stop her being fucked was a bit unbelievable, and how many eighteen year old girls don't fuck anyway? Also I don't think the cocks needed to be so huge, just a hot woman with a cock is enough. Finally Sarah's description of her plan took some of the steam out of what I thought was one of the hottest sex scenes I've read.

But these are just my thoughts and the author writes what he likes and I thank you for doing so. The initial seduction between Linda and Leah was especially good, well described, nicely paced and makes the reader almost feel Linda's nervous arousal.

As I said, it's not normally my thing, but you may now have a new convert.

Five stars from me.

Seriously. That would have been really nice. It would just take five seconds to list some god damn content warnings at the beginning. As someone else said, if I wanted to read about a bunch of horrible bitches gladly and without a single bit of hesitence cheating on their husbands then I would have went to the loving wives section. Have some god damn decency and consideration for the readers and tag your stories properly.

To everyone else, people bitching about the cheating when it wasn't properly tagged is not them being "trolls". Grow the fuck up.

Ok i get that its porn so porn logic but the much more obvious answer here would be to simply say that if she got the daughter pregnant they'd demand child support and all medical costs along with whatever else they could and basically just make it clear that she will ruin her life. honestly its not that hard. and you can threaten to kick the daughter out of the house. like literally dozens of other possibilities here and i think they chose probably the worst one

It has a bit of a 'Stepford Wives' feel to it, (do a bit of older movie research to understand the reference. It'll also explain why I can't even begin to explain what I mean w- reference, without writing a friggin' dissertation on psychological abnormalities! LOL The movie's gotta be 30-40 years old, but the title became a social reference pretty much instantly.)

The plot is tissue paperthin. Reality, even in a fantastical Futa story is actually what makes a story like this more believeable, as bizarre as that sounds. First, teenage girls are as dick hungry as teenage boys are pussy hungry, and with the more open acceptance of GLBT, XYZ, teen girls and boys are both pussy and cock hungry. Especially when you add in thr social/psychological influence of Internet porn availability.

You wrote this like the mother, Linda, was from the fuckin' 50's, or '60's, and I should know, 'cause I lived them. The '70's, and beyond changed everyone's perspective on sex, and since you didn't place your story in time, it can only be assumed it is contemporary. That means your mothers in the story would have been born in the '70's.

The '70's were pivotal in our country, and to a lesser extent the world, (due to the Catholic churches archaic stance on birth control, or 'non-birth control', to be more accurate. Personally, I think the policy is based more on a perverse drive for expansion of Catholicism via the tried and true, out breed them method, but that's another story.), because the ready availability of reliable reliable birth control exploded in the '70's.

I came of age right across the cusp of that explosion. My older friends and relatives lived during a time of massive teen pregnancy, and forced marriages, (the majority of which failed in <10 years, because of the forced nature, AND the changes brought about by available birth control.

Getting pregnant and being forced to marry someone at 16-17 is a recipe for divorce. I literally knew dozens of people in the previous generation to mine, (my HS graduation: '71), who were married with multiple children before they were out of their teens. No wonder the last 100 years in this country have been so fucked up.

Children raising children, most of the time, without a spouse, combined with lack of even a high school diploma, because heaven forbid, can't have a teen girl go to school openly pregnant. "!Why, it would just make the other children think about sex all the time." I wish I had a buck for everytime I heard THAT. They're thinking about sex all the time, anyway; letting them see the reality of sex without responsibility MIGHT be a postive influence.

The bottom line is the obvious solution to worrying about their teen daughters getting knocked up by their horny Futa friend is birth control. Besides, the girls are all adults, technically, so what fucking business is it of the parents, at that point. (I know, you're forced into aging them above 18), but you can't just pretend it doesn't influence the plot. This is why wriing is hard work. If you're not willing to do the hard work, don't fucking write

Which leads me into my next criticism, and why what could have been a 5 star tale should only earn a 3 in truth, but due to Lit rating inflation it gets a 4.3-4.5 average: do some fucking proofreading.

Once the scene started with your protagonist, Linda, Leah and Sarah, you kept using Lean instead of Sarah, and the scene went to shit. You get to the literary and smut climax of the story, and it seemed like you were one-hand typing, and created so much confusion over which character was saying what, the reader gets completely pulled out of the scene, and the story flops because of it.

Get ahold of yourself while you're writing the smut... actually, LET GO of yourself while you're writing the smut, and get your head into what you're writing, and your work will greatly improve.

You need to do a thorough proofing, at least, though a re-write for plot issues would be best.

I won't be going on to Ch 2.

Very sexy. Turns me on and I read it a lot!

It's a fantasy story and I am turned on with the second half with the !other enjoying sucking the daughter, kissing and having sex with her then sucking her mother and Sarah joins in, kissing and sucking and fucking then mother and daughter kiss and gets facial cum and kiss. Very sexy..even be good with pictures. I like the next part too with the mother sucking her in front of her friends then she male fucks her and gets sucked clean. Very sexy..

If they're so afraid for their daughters' sake, they can just expel her from the neighbourhood or cut off the extra parts. Threats and coercion shouldn't even exist for someone who doesn't have the power to back it up.

It was good until Sarah entered the picture.

It was better with just Leah and Linda, although having other moms join in later would have been great.

very sexy

Oh no it's not shakespeare. I don't read erotica expecting that level of quality, and I will that I enjoyed this. Though yes, a higher level of suspension of disbelief is necessary for the actual plot part, but I've seen weaker reasoning employed in doujins--Cos that's what I'm into a lot of the time.

That said, I do have some criticisms which I hope are taken as constructive. They are based on what I think is important for an erotica to have, not for a conventional story.

There is little to no physical description of the women actually doing the sex in this story. The other housewives that never got a sex scene somehow had more description with their hair colors and such. That makes it quite difficult to visualize them.

The positions are not described well enough, particularly when Linda and Sarah were getting fucked at the same time. I thought Linda was lying on her back, but then Leah comes from behind? Are they both getting doggied, and then meeting to kiss in the middle, or something else? It's confusing, and does take quite a bit out of the scene. And again, hard to visualize as well.

No hate to the author, would love to see them get better--And this is from a while back. Maybe they have already. I'm certainly not opposed to checking out more of their work.

Too far out in left field

Ever hear of contractions? They're unique types of words that combine two or more other words in a shortened form, like can not or I have and turn into can't or I've. Combining multiple words into one makes your writing more compact, potent and conversational.

"Mom I am home" or "Mom I'm home." Which would you say is better? It's a no-brainer. Use them and your stories will be so much better.

wow! such a great story !! Im hoping for a chapter where the film the breeding Linda and her getting DP by them!

Please continue their story!

The suspension of disbelief here is too much. I’m supposed to believe that, so that a kid doesn’t rape her friends, the mothers of the kids take their place? It’s decently written but the plot is abysmal. 4/10.