All Comments on 'PokeBondage Ch. 01'

i would really appreciate more of the story to be written and submitted, i thought the first page was really enticing.

This was pretty damn good, look forward to the next chapter.

i do know what i like/love and this story is one of them. i can't wait to see what chapter 2 brings.

Hurry up and write the second chapter

leather does not constitute sex... tame, lame what a pity, such a shame

rite chapter 2

WHAT THE FUCK there was no sex nothing that even constitutes as sexual.

man u need to write more its al right

keep writing

Ok, U R in fourth Grade - I can see THAT, bub. THIS is a sex story site,U know. At least give charizard a BONER fergoshsakes! I mean, WTF? I could'veseen THIS on Saturday morning TV, child! SPICE IT UP. @ least describe Misty's ass, OK? A TOTALLY pointless waste of my time, Hadgfer. U've prolly never ever SEEN a real breast,rite! Christ. THIS story SUX!

i like the starting. u hav me waiting.

Its a bit annoying to just leave it like that but the idea of a pokemon erotic tale is good! Spice it up later though, put some humiliation in it or something. Potential...

The story is good so far. what you could to with is Misty being attacked by the Pokemon, and them having their way with her when Ash and Brock are away.

I really liked it! Post more;)

Dude its greate but u should kake a sequel twice as lohgnand with actuwll sex in it