All Comments on 'Poker Night at the Lab'

Great story, extremely well written

So I managed not to get lost in the labyrinth of the engineering building and found the lab. I walked in, and Natalie briefly glanced up. I noticed she was wearing that green tie-dyed t-shirt that I had told her I liked the previous **week week**.

Started should be stared.

Overall, very good story.

Very well written. Spent a lot of teasing to get to the finish, but very good time was had by all. Loved it!!

Just because you're actively seeing comments...

-Introduction seems too long. Can't we get to the good part faster?

-Wanting to check her bras for the size -- so juvenile.

-What does "week weak" mean?

-The way they talk, getting so upset about flirting, seems so high school.

-Having her control the breaking of the hymen doesn't sound right. It wouldn't

work well. It would be better if he did and it were quickly over with. Most

women cannot inflict the pain on themselves like that.

-And no discussion of birth control?

-Story goes on a little too long at the end.

-Still, pretty good and I liked that the women characters at least all had

their own personalities. The guy's personality was a little difficult to pin

down.