All Comments on 'Poker was the Start'

You're not here to teach English 101. You're here to get a hard-on or get your 'rocks off' so stuff the teaching mode UP YOUR ASS, SHUT UP & read along with the rest of us!

The spelling and grammatical errors were a little distracting though. I realize that English is not your native tongue. Maybe you can get a member here to proofread for you. I know I've read a lot of stories on here that gave credit to a proofreader.

You have ability and I really enjoyed your story.

next time try writing it in actual English, if you need help find someone to help you. the grammar and language spoken is horrible.

Why is this stories rating so low, should be high, easy 5

Terrible grammar. May I suggest you get a proofreader. There are several on this site that volunteer to help.