All Comments on 'Poker was the Start'

Terrible grammar. May I suggest you get a proofreader. There are several on this site that volunteer to help.

Why is this stories rating so low, should be high, easy 5

next time try writing it in actual English, if you need help find someone to help you. the grammar and language spoken is horrible.

The spelling and grammatical errors were a little distracting though. I realize that English is not your native tongue. Maybe you can get a member here to proofread for you. I know I've read a lot of stories on here that gave credit to a proofreader.

You have ability and I really enjoyed your story.

You're not here to teach English 101. You're here to get a hard-on or get your 'rocks off' so stuff the teaching mode UP YOUR ASS, SHUT UP & read along with the rest of us!