All Comments on 'Police Training Ch. 01'

Great story, please add some more chapters

Very interesting story line. Enjoyed the conversational exchanges very much. Would be interesting to hear about both characters even if not together! Thanks for sharing

Great story, I loved the characters and the chemistry between them. Nic is the quintessential alpha male and Lizzy is sassy, brash woman who clearly enjoys sex doesn't back down. And a brilliant premise too, although I've no idea how you would resolve it if this is going to be part of a bigger series/

Is this going to be part of a bigger series? I hope so.

Brilliant twist at the end!

just wondering ... Any chance Nic has some kind of business relationship with Marcus? Friends, associates, or perhaps, rivals?

Anyway, glad you're back; thrilled to have a new story from you. Another 5 stars from me. Wish there was a way to give you more than 5. Loved Lizzie's strength. All those magic cocks conquering bratty girls ... yawn, boring.

really packs a punch

dificult to read this tale slowly , the story glides smoothly across the page , with the readers eyes & brain playing catch up from the get go....

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a worthy 5 stars

fucking loved it

xxxhugsxxx

A hot, sexy, spirited story about 2 strong-willed people. Original and well written!

WOW - thanks for your time and talent!

love it... good job

Mmmm. Hot and sexy. Love the power play between the two. Also love that's she's a stubborn badass unwilling to submit but I suspect they'll both alternately be submitting to the other soon.

When I wasn't panting, I smiled through the whole thing! Beautifully seamless writing & originality, too.

Who’s telling it? At times she is, other times, not.