by lioness_71
When I wasn't panting, I smiled through the whole thing! Beautifully seamless writing & originality, too.
Mmmm. Hot and sexy. Love the power play between the two. Also love that's she's a stubborn badass unwilling to submit but I suspect they'll both alternately be submitting to the other soon.
A hot, sexy, spirited story about 2 strong-willed people. Original and well written!
really packs a punch
dificult to read this tale slowly , the story glides smoothly across the page , with the readers eyes & brain playing catch up from the get go....
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a worthy 5 stars
fucking loved it
xxxhugsxxx
just wondering ... Any chance Nic has some kind of business relationship with Marcus? Friends, associates, or perhaps, rivals?
Anyway, glad you're back; thrilled to have a new story from you. Another 5 stars from me. Wish there was a way to give you more than 5. Loved Lizzie's strength. All those magic cocks conquering bratty girls ... yawn, boring.
Great story, I loved the characters and the chemistry between them. Nic is the quintessential alpha male and Lizzy is sassy, brash woman who clearly enjoys sex doesn't back down. And a brilliant premise too, although I've no idea how you would resolve it if this is going to be part of a bigger series/
Is this going to be part of a bigger series? I hope so.
Very interesting story line. Enjoyed the conversational exchanges very much. Would be interesting to hear about both characters even if not together! Thanks for sharing