All Comments on 'Practical Joke, or Serious Mistake?'

Impressive prose...erotic, hot and titalating. Please keep up the excellent work.

Tis a hateful, vengeful, sexual society where savagery and cruelty reigns. Evil in its purest form. Where egos are high and love will never reign in this unholy dark, spectrum of blackness and infertility. Where the innocent are slaves and hope is but a dream long forgotten. Fun and games are but a dangerous step unable to be preformed by the weak. Death amuses and life is overlooked and easily disposed of. Ooohh the dark, meaningless lives of the undead. Funny how before that ending conclusion, some would agree that is OUR society. This is our society 1000x worse. I weep for their wasted souls. I admire your detailed underworld. Good thing this wasn't emotional or else I WOULD be crying. You can't afford a mean pratical joke in a place where they're are hollow hearts, and cold mocking echoing laughter. Laughter tis a thing of the soul. The only core these creatures have is their body parts, and a decaying mind, with no stable core of the soul. Evil is what flows through their veins along with wasted blood. Trouble is, will Erin still go to heaven? IF she WAS good in a former life, then yes, she still has a chance. Great job showing us how these ego inflated corpses spend their countless nights. Without love, life is pointless. Eternal estcasy is for the insane. At what price do you pay? "Give up your sanity, turn your back on humanity. And you don't give a damn." That line is from inner circle lyrics, games people play. Fits this piece perfectly, as fate would have it, I was just listnening to it, and that line popped up. I wrote the rest of this long critique. Seduction will be their reduction as their souls have no real goals. Their souls have fled they're solid bodies, and their inner darkness rules them. Give up salvation for damnation. I would advise you to put them out of their misery, but the vampires are too interesting to read about. Keep it up! ;) I enjoyed this piece of literature. Ohhh the blank, dull, stares of the dead...

A thought: Can vampires die in this way?

I like the vampire, the mix of passion and death, but wonder if we could be doing something wild and steamy with vegetables? Tomatoes with fangs? Turgid figs. The undead cucumber?

Or perhaps not.