All Comments on 'Prank War Casualty'

by Gaius8666

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tw63tw63almost 8 years ago
Reluctant

I love this, looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
A giant plot hole.

I suppose no RA's got word that public nudity was happening on campus where a guy was tied up, eh? Completely sanctioned by all faculty and administrators for days? Sure, maybe you didn't mention that he got fed and had something to drink other than his own semen, but this goes past revenge and even harsh BDSM into physical and psychological torture.

Not really happy you wrote a rape and torture story. It would feel worse if it was a woman because I know where you would have put some of the electrical probes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Different Nick Name

Yeah, if that was me, my nick name would have been "The guy who got an entire female population of a university thrown in prison." This went from a slightly malicious prank where NONE of the photos were widely distributed to a literal CRIME. Holy shit the first thing I would have done is call the cops.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This was torture and rape

When he went to the Campus Police and the City Police the girls all went to prison. After all, they were stupid enough to take pictures for themselves while committing serious crimes. So every women that had a picture was an accomplice and they went to jail. This was stupid. They untie his left hand and the next woman that gets close gets her light punched out. Unless they're going to kill him and try to dispose of the body they might find his revenge upon them fatal. Horrible unfinished story

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